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We Had Pillow Eyes From the Start

we had pillow eyes from the start pass me whisky we be frisky you are so hot for a shot we drink the smile veil eyes are guile our horses rein on barstool's pain our chambers are loaded to be goaded we play the role on tips and toes some, we banter laugh, as our horses canter we joke and play while our horses neigh the barship's been fun but it's time to run to take our horses to park where hedges and trees embark she gives the other suitors a blink i follow with a knowing wink we throw barkeep a fin and leave arm and arm with wry grins connie pachecho 2/2/17

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Date: 3/8/2017 8:30:00 PM
Oh God I love walking into a bar. : )
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Date: 3/2/2017 2:49:00 PM
I agree with Chris, this poem is different. Well done Connie.
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Date: 3/2/2017 2:31:00 PM
This has an old west feel to it with a little horsing around to boot. Nicely done Connie.
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