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We Didn't See it Coming

You took your golden arrow and you aimed it at my heart; I didn't see it coming but I felt our loving start. It began a gentle ripple that spread throughout my soul. It left me feeling happy and it made my life seem whole. Then you went and touched me, as only lover's do; my world became a better place all because of you. My hopes became your promises, our dreams were uncompared. With the loving that you gave to me and all the times we shared. So keep it coming always, let our candle forever burn. We've found true love's beginnings, and now we have to learn. To hold on to each other and listen to our hearts. We didn't see it coming but we felt our loving start.

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Date: 4/26/2025 3:11:00 PM
Hello Ron, i think it is a good idea to frame this poem and put it on the nighttab.e so both of you can read thjis poem. /Your Friend. /Darlene/
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