Premiere Contest WinnerWe Dance

We dance with desire; we dance with dislike.
As human beings, we all are alike.
Flames of desire will always leap higher.
We dance with dislike; we dance with desire.

If desire is lust, we must slow the dance.
Slow to a stop; self-restraint give a chance!
Learn not to tango with what we can’t trust.
We must slow the dance if desire is lust.

We allemande right; we allemande left.
We must learn to move with steps that are deft
and dance for good things that bring great delight.
We allemande left; we allemande right.

While dancing each day, try moves that are new.
Practice through life how the spirit moves you.
Choose partners wisely with whom you will sway.
Try moves that are new while dancing each day.

Let dance stir the soul. Be moved by sweet grace.
Dance not with aversion. Smooth moves embrace!
The rhythm of body with spirit control.
Be moved by sweet grace. Let dance stir the soul.

Sept. 30, 2022

This Quatrain form is called Swap Quatrain
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Daniel Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:54 PM
Great swap quatrain, Andrea, dance on, congratulations:)
Kauffman Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 9:09 PM
Back with congratulation Andrea! Such a fun dance. Blessings on your dance!
Chunn Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 5:37 PM
Congrats Andrea....nicely done!
Kitchin Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 2:57 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your first place win, enjoyed!
Alex Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 10:21 PM
Great Quatrain. Lovely thoughts and refglectipons on dance.
George Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 8:30 PM
A Big Congratulations on your trophy win, Andrea!
Mandani Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 4:06 PM
Very nice, Andrea. Great job!
Poet Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 3:28 PM
Back with Congratulations on your top contest win that you amly deserved, Andrea. Best regards
Emate Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 3:25 PM
This is so beautiful, Andrea. Congratulations!
George Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 11:31 PM
A very sprightly mood you have created, Andrea. Let us dance in love and joy. Lovely !
Buhagiar Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 12:10 PM
You remind me of my youth when my wife and I would go dancing. Not now alas. Lovely poem, so well composed.
Walker Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 5:25 PM
Great usage of metaphor. Dance sis dance.
Poet Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 1:45 PM
Job well done, Andrea! The comparison of visuals to dancing is done really effectively in this passage. Best of luck to you in the contest!
Hankins Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 1:15 PM
Nicely done, Andrea. I enjoyed it. Best of luck in the contest.
Emmanuel Brown Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 12:53 PM
Beautiful. Nice poem.
Milgate Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 12:07 PM
lovely
Kauffman Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 10:07 AM
So well done Andrea! The metaphor of dance and imagery is so well written. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings on your dance!
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