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We Could Have Been Warriors We Still Are

We could have been borders away from home Fighting battles we know not of Walking between bullets Stepping on iron made traps We could have been warriors But our hearts just wouldn't stop fighting War of love for the ones our heart beat for For those beautiful angels We just couldn't risk walking between bullets If not... We could have been warriors For our unborn replica inside our jewels The thoughts of never holding them All because of some war we know not of We want them the privilege of knowing us If not... We could have been warriors We aren't cowards, we are strong and brave! But the war within our hearts has been won By warriors without gun our hearts beat for If not.. We could have been warriors But here, we raise a toast To the true warriors who walked between bullets Who fought borders away from home Loyal soldiers who fought for their nation For the true heroes they are For the legacy they laid between dangers Like them... We could have been warriors Inspired by the movie "Love and Honor " directed by Kamen Velkovsky, Sheri Davani. © Abosede Ogundare 2016

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Date: 1/2/2017 7:56:00 AM
Good piece love the refrain
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Date: 12/31/2016 6:39:00 PM
One of the bet I have read today. I like the effect of the repeating line.
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Date: 12/31/2016 12:38:00 AM
Lovely write. I love how you used a refrain to bring this truth home so well. Yes, some risk their lives so that we can dream big dreams and enjoy freedom. Great write.
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/31/2016 5:22:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words Eileen...Those who risk their lives for their nation are real heroes. We pray all war stops and peace reigns.
Date: 12/29/2016 3:13:00 PM
Very nice tribute to those that are fighting the unwanted wars, and yes our hearts have won our war with God... thank you for sharing hugs eve
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/30/2016 9:31:00 AM
It was a pleasure sharing this poem Eve, lets pray God heal our land and there should be an end to all war.
Date: 12/28/2016 11:21:00 AM
You write from the heart, Abosede; sincerity gives added meaning to your words. May in time all wars be replaced by peace and love! ~ Regards // paul
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/30/2016 9:27:00 AM
Amen to your prayer Paul, thanks for your kind comments always.
Date: 12/28/2016 9:33:00 AM
This one is a great tribute to all those soldiers fighting for our country, Abosede:)
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/30/2016 9:26:00 AM
Thanks Jo.
Date: 12/28/2016 5:48:00 AM
Profound writing, gracious message dear, Abosede! Welcome to our poetic family! happy New Year!
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/30/2016 9:13:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words Demetrios. And it's an honour to be part of the poetic family.

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