We Could Have Been Warriors We Still Are

We could have been borders away from home 
Fighting battles we know not of 
Walking between bullets 
Stepping on iron made traps 

We could have been warriors 

But our hearts just wouldn't stop fighting 
War of love for the ones our heart beat for 
For those beautiful angels 
We just couldn't risk walking between bullets 

If not...  We could have been warriors 

For our unborn replica inside our jewels 
The thoughts of never holding them 
All because of some war we know not of
We want them the privilege of knowing us 

If not...  We could have been warriors 

We aren't cowards,  we are strong and brave!
But the war within our hearts has been won 
By warriors without gun our hearts beat for 

If not.. We could have been warriors 

But here,  we raise a toast 
To the true warriors who walked between bullets 
Who fought borders away from home 
Loyal soldiers who fought for their nation 
For the true heroes they are 
For the legacy they laid between dangers 

Like them... We could have been warriors 





Inspired by the movie "Love and Honor " directed by Kamen Velkovsky,  Sheri Davani.
 
© Abosede Ogundare 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/2/2017 7:56:00 AM
Good piece love the refrain
Login to Reply
Date: 12/31/2016 6:39:00 PM
One of the bet I have read today. I like the effect of the repeating line.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/31/2016 12:38:00 AM
Lovely write. I love how you used a refrain to bring this truth home so well. Yes, some risk their lives so that we can dream big dreams and enjoy freedom. Great write.
Login to Reply
Ogundare Avatar
Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/31/2016 5:22:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words Eileen...Those who risk their lives for their nation are real heroes. We pray all war stops and peace reigns.
Date: 12/29/2016 3:13:00 PM
Very nice tribute to those that are fighting the unwanted wars, and yes our hearts have won our war with God... thank you for sharing hugs eve
Login to Reply
Ogundare Avatar
Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/30/2016 9:31:00 AM
It was a pleasure sharing this poem Eve, lets pray God heal our land and there should be an end to all war.
Date: 12/28/2016 11:21:00 AM
You write from the heart, Abosede; sincerity gives added meaning to your words. May in time all wars be replaced by peace and love! ~ Regards // paul
Login to Reply
Ogundare Avatar
Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/30/2016 9:27:00 AM
Amen to your prayer Paul, thanks for your kind comments always.
Date: 12/28/2016 9:33:00 AM
This one is a great tribute to all those soldiers fighting for our country, Abosede:)
Login to Reply
Ogundare Avatar
Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/30/2016 9:26:00 AM
Thanks Jo.
Date: 12/28/2016 5:48:00 AM
Profound writing, gracious message dear, Abosede! Welcome to our poetic family! happy New Year!
Login to Reply
Ogundare Avatar
Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/30/2016 9:13:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words Demetrios. And it's an honour to be part of the poetic family.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad