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I don’t know who invented it but it has a  rhyme scheme of ABABCC  ABABDD, and a syllable pattern of  888844  888844 (looks good centered, but that’s optional)

      

There's still hope for humanity we need to learn to get along and move past the insanity of doing what we know is wrong. We left our caves, and made men slaves. Our fate’s fueled by vanity, argumentative and headstrong we're stewards of profanity and can't tolerate trust for long. It all sounds strange, but we can change.

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Date: 7/29/2021 6:44:00 PM
Superb writing, my friend. I must try this pattern soon. You make it look easy, but I'm sure it is not so. Good stuff!!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/30/2021 7:25:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, as always, I both welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/29/2021 4:04:00 PM
I love this. Pure Brilliance! Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/30/2021 7:24:00 AM
Thanks, Regina, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/29/2021 2:55:00 PM
A fantastic poem, Emile! I enjoyed reading it! I'll have to give this form a try! Blessings, Kim M
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/29/2021 3:41:00 PM
Thanks, Kim, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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