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We are Twin Souls

She lures me to the edge of the beach My hair blowing in the cool wind of her. I breathe her in, feeling we are one. This feeling I get nowhere else. I breathe her in as she greets me. I feel wild and free so I take off my shirt. I plunge into her; gasping at the initial cold. She embraces me, luring me to swim. We are twin souls – the ocean and me.

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Date: 11/26/2021 6:58:00 PM
I am in awe of the magnificent force of the ocean. It has a calming effect on me from the beach... I loved the verse.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/27/2021 7:31:00 PM
I like to look at the ocean but I swim in lakes where there are no alligators, crocodiles or sharks.
Date: 11/25/2021 7:16:00 PM
Ah, 'tis true, so very true. I feel that I must go to the ocean occasionally to renew my spirits. The ocean is Mother Nature subline, rocking to and fro with the soothing sounds of the surf. Beautiful writing, Caren. Inspiring...too!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/26/2021 2:20:00 PM
Thank you Hank - glad you saw it recently!
Date: 11/25/2021 6:07:00 PM
Well, after all, aren't we humans made up of something like 70 - 90% water ---depending upon which science one is following, of course. lol.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/26/2021 2:20:00 PM
Yes 90 percent
Date: 11/25/2021 5:25:00 AM
Amazing write about the ocean, Caren:) I see from your photos that you have a twin sister too:) it must be great:) I have always loved twins:)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/26/2021 2:20:00 PM
I surely do!
Date: 11/24/2021 3:39:00 PM
Hello Caren, wow! Super!! Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/26/2021 2:41:00 PM
HelloCaren, you are welcome. Hugs.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/26/2021 2:21:00 PM
Thank you Darlene
Date: 11/24/2021 2:48:00 PM
this is great, caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/26/2021 2:21:00 PM
Thank you Ilene