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We Are Stardust

Once long ago another place another existence we were only stardust swirling in some pastel nebula the beginning of love I with you and you with me unaware of the future together without distracting society... Formed in the briefest space and time two primordial souls connecting void physical form or speech to impede predestined ordained love nothing to weigh upon metaphysical shoulders so conceived or ever unjust so simple and uncomplicated when we were only stardust... I love every atom of your DNA every molecule in your body the universe inside of you let us love and honor the stars shimmer and sparkle in the cosmic night together we spin out of nothingness born to further the shining light... ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/4/2014 5:30:00 PM
She must have loved this one. Outstanding!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/4/2014 5:39:00 PM
Thanks Richard for stopping by!
Date: 4/3/2014 1:25:00 PM
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/3/2014 3:09:00 PM
Ok responded..
Date: 4/2/2014 7:33:00 AM
love this piece,great write Ken
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/2/2014 7:42:00 AM
Thank you for the kind comment Richard!
Date: 4/2/2014 6:30:00 AM
Ahh, such a passionate and romantic work for the lady in your life..I am sure that she will love this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/2/2014 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Sara!
Date: 4/2/2014 2:42:00 AM
- Deep and genuine - romantic and beautiful, Ken. - Like the idea of "stardust" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/2/2014 7:18:00 AM
Thank you Anne!
Date: 4/1/2014 2:02:00 PM
Ken, weeee! Talk about sugar, sugar DNA. I like the sweet celestial metaphors you chose to picture while writing the poem. I picture you closing your eyes, enjoying the stardust that pours from the universe into your heart. Excellent poem... xox~ Luv ~Linda
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/1/2014 2:06:00 PM
Thanks Linda for visiting this humble write today! Hope you're having a lovely day..

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