Premiere Contest WinnerWe Are Alone

No matter our relationships and their details,
we all share a commonality that prevails.
It is a truth I have tried and failed to disown.
No matter love depths grown securely known -
          at times we are alone, all alone – alone.

Wake the same morn, share the same night,
know full lives lived within each other’s sight
in the same house with one glowing night light,
and still, there is no way this truth loses bone -
          at times we are alone, all alone – alone.

Once and more, life will steer our hearts to tears
and no matter the love that surrounds us,
there are times none appears to calm our fuss.
Each shatter is deeper when no love is shown -
          at times we are alone, all alone – alone.

Days come to all when sadness lacks a shoulder lent.
Issues can find us that a love’s coldness may augment. 
In life, all will ponder time as relationship-torment. 
All couples eventually ache from harmony blown –

          at times we are alone, all alone – alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 5:27 PM
Hello Cay-Cay, Congrats on your win. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 6:20 PM
Congrats for your win, Caycay. This is so heartfelt and the refrain is beautifully melancholy.
Ashley Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 3:21 PM
CayCay, I was swept up and away by the tender melancholy of your exceptional poem. I especially enjoyed the repeated line that emphasized with haunting beauty the loneliness that can ensue in life. Congratulations on your excellent trophy win. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Awtry Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 11:50 AM
True—and it is comforting to know that it is a universal phenomenon... lovely sad poem. Many congratulations!
Warrior Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 8:12 AM
Congrats!! Cay Cay...very well crafted my friend...sending love...^WW^
Hamilton Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 11:01 AM
Enjoyed this truthful rhyme, Cay Cay, the repeated refrain gives this a melodic feel which of course I appreciate. Love your choice of singers Elton, Van, can't forget Simon, or Dillon, poetry and song for me are one, I'm always drawn to poetry that has musicality embedded, which this one does!
Gauthier Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 1:24 PM
Congrats on your win, CayCay. Well penned.
Ravidas Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 10:28 AM
Oh, this is really beautiful, CayCay. As beautiful as a lonely echo, repeating alone, lone, one. Definitely a fave.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 1:14 PM
Hello Cay-Cay, I just read your poem. You know something thes words are so true. have a nice day my friend.
Y. Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 11:03 AM
WoW! Cay Cay, What a deep and thought provoking write. But I must say that I agree and disagree. Thanks for writing such a write. PS, I have missed your visits. Hope to see you soon:-) Alexis
Godwin Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 11:24 AM
I've missed you, too! I agree and disagree with most things in life so I understand. I got a giggle from that comment and I'm delighted you shared it - means you're comfortable with me. It's where I land though after thinking about it all my adult life. I'm the only one who is always kind to me despite whatever mood I'm in. This includes friends, siblings, parents... There are many songs with this theme, for now, my brain can only grab Cher's line, 'Sooner or Later, We All Sleep Alone.' That doesn't mean I'm not in love or loved. I'll come see you soon cause I want to. CayCay
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