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im just a no one a cold piece of iron salt on a cut i am pain something most everyone dreads i am hate a feeling only the hated understand i am death God greatest gift

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Lucinda Bulger

Date: 4/20/2010 11:55:00 AM

You are not hate dear man, I disagree. Hatred society breeds and I myself at times have been overwhelmed with it myself. You are not death certainly, I wholeheartedly again disagree, death is merely a result of the end of a physical life. What is beyond, humanly we all must find out one day. Personlly, I think of the past as breaths already breathed, and each new one, ah, yup, that one's gone, Enjoy as many as you can dear poet. I love your expression, it is honest. Hopes of love and livihood :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/18/2010 4:57:00 AM

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