We Agree To Grieve--------------

We agree to grieve
against all inaccuracies
that you plant ,going awry all the time
to make us fall as  preys to your planted ill fate

Your reddened eyes
will not frighten me my friend!
Your hard heart
and autumnal   feel always –do--.

Practically you are a key doll
ready to play foul in some ones' hands.
Humanity is not there
to counter your criminal bent of mind
and you feel not faulty at your heart beats
when some  of their hopes and desires
are soaked in blood –shed 
showered by your splinter stricken bombs

Have you not heard the cries of a mother
Who lost her grown up children?
Have you not heard the bane
showered on you by the children 
Who lost their bread earners?
all these  will not go unrewarded
by a suitable punishment in days to come.

Let not  your own people meet this type of  ill fate
Today or tomorrow,in the similar kind of unhappy blasts
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 9/19/2024 5:31:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 5:32:00 PM
PURUSHOTHAMA RAO RAVELA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/29/2015 7:20:00 PM
PURUSHOTHAMA RAO RAVELA, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 1/6/2009 7:07:00 PM
Thank you
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Date: 1/6/2009 7:03:00 PM
This was a mindful poem here and I really felt the poetic fire in here. loved the story as well you had hidden in there. enjoyed reading and you have a nice day.
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