We -Rm

We drive and drive Thirsty to thrive Hungry for the things' no longer alive We smile a fake smile Knowing we are wasting miles To simply discover our daily denial We breathe, we breathe Initially to pause racing thoughts Then to hope our felicity will never leave

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Jean Omalley Polatnick

Date: 1/14/2015 7:57:00 AM

Truly enjoyed your thoughtful creation! Thanks! ~ Jean

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2015 10:07:00 PM

Renee, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Andy Dangercat

Date: 1/9/2015 8:59:00 PM

I found this absolutely breath taking. Beautiful piece.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/5/2015 11:39:00 AM

Hi Renee . Welcome to PS. Love-rajat

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/5/2015 5:20:00 AM

- A warm welcome to the P - Soup and into the new year 2015 - I look forward to reading more of your poems this year - I hope you will enjoy reading and writing with us, Renee - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/3/2015 4:34:00 AM

hi Renee, welcome to soup very good pen for your first poem here. You will find the more you comment on other poets the more they will comment on your poems. Again welcome and keep writing hugs

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 1/2/2015 11:51:00 PM

Come,come to soup a warm welcome dear poet Renee. -Safa

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2015 10:59:00 PM

Renee, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Jerry Swana

Date: 1/2/2015 9:53:00 PM

I dig it :) your words likely cross everyone's mind. The past lingers around more than it should

Renee Muravez
Date: 1/2/2015 10:05:00 PM

Thank you, Gerald (:I agree it lingers but sometimes it puts my mind into disarray

John Fleming

Date: 1/2/2015 9:28:00 PM

An intriguing little poem, Renee. :) john.

Renee Muravez
Date: 1/2/2015 9:40:00 PM

Aw thank you john (: