L Milton Hankins Poet Limerick

Wayward-Thinking Lover

Once was a smart, forward-thinking young lady in Gloucester
Her wayward-thinking lover she summarily oustered
Since his libido he couldn’t control,
Ceremoniously, he had to go
And soon, thereafter, he became a carnival rouster.

written December 4, 2021

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Delice Arleen Skelly December 6, 2021 at 7:32 AM Funny.....Delice L Milton Hankins December 6, 2021 at 8:40 AM Well, thank you. It wasn't my best, but I thought I'd see what everyone thought of it.

Caren Krutsinger December 5, 2021 at 1:41 AM It sounds like a good career for him - traveling town to town. L Milton Hankins December 5, 2021 at 9:05 AM Yeah, I suppose he can break hearts wherever he goes!

Gershon Wolf December 4, 2021 at 4:46 PM And when the carnival didn't work out, poor fellow was left being a carnal rooster... L Milton Hankins December 4, 2021 at 6:23 PM Ha! You got that right!

Kim Rodrigues December 4, 2021 at 12:47 PM Hopefully not the one that plummeted to his death (in my “three ring circus”) oh oh… She was the smart one. L Milton Hankins December 4, 2021 at 1:05 PM Yes, she was, Kim. I agree with your assessment. No, I would not wish him death!