Wayward

I have done it my own way, 

wouldn't listen to what they say.

   Most of my life spent out of touch,

clinging to my world, that wasn't much.

   Chasing my dreams, only for riches,

finding the goals, full of glitches.

   So one day a friend planted a seed,

in hoping his word's would be a creed.

   It wasn't his words, that changed my life, 

but the word of God, that cut like a knife. 

   I have been wayward, i would have to claim, 

his love for me, is how i became.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/6/2011 5:07:00 PM
So glad I found this wonderful verse John. It's simplicity speaks to me and your faith shines in it. Lovely as always dear friend.
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Date: 5/14/2011 8:50:00 PM
I feel exactly the same way, deep and powerful is your poem, well done ~~
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Date: 5/14/2011 1:15:00 PM
Such a lovely write john ! I have always been found of your poems . They are strong and powerful . Love Smriti
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Date: 5/13/2011 9:38:00 PM
It's so wonderful when the shepard finds his sheep, just as in this poem. R.M.
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Date: 5/13/2011 7:43:00 PM
John.. such an enlightenment u experienced and penning this beauty for all to read of God's Word and it's awesome power ... I rely on it daily.. without fail... it changes lives for the better .. proof in speaking it out loud and seeing the power unfold my friend.. truly inspiring write ..happy weekend..
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Date: 5/13/2011 5:12:00 PM
Positive poem John, one anyone would be proud to write and to live. Anne.
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Date: 5/13/2011 4:07:00 PM
john, asking all kids of questions when one has felt out of touch,,,, and yet we find a way to stay away from the old strays .. and come into terms with changing and finding the right behavior to find god,,, take care,, and thanks for sharing,..p.d.
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