Constance La France Poet Free verse

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Wayra Vortex Blear

I got on   a train~
             that became a   neon trip;
                 a wild  vortex  tunnel blear,
       a freak   voyage obscure !
                  Oh,  what  is my  DESTINATION ?

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August 15, 2019


Poetry/Free Verse/Wayra/Vortex Blear
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1172-451-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, SECOND EDITION OF WAYRA
sponsor, Nette Onclaud

Fourth Place

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Subimal Sinha-Roy August 23, 2019 at 7:22 AM Congratulations, Constance on your win.

Eve Roper August 22, 2019 at 11:55 PM Congratulations my dear friend. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier August 22, 2019 at 4:59 AM Congrats on your win, Constance. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich August 21, 2019 at 5:08 PM I really like this one, Constance! I like how you gave it your "feeling" and Congrats!

John Gondolf August 21, 2019 at 3:29 PM Congrats on your win, Constance, sometimes I feel like I'm traveling through life not knowing what my destination is. Guess I better figure it out pretty soon since I'm almost there. Hugs, John Constance La France August 21, 2019 at 4:07 PM John, my destination keeps changing so how will i ever arrive... thanks for the congrats !

Nette Onclaud August 21, 2019 at 2:57 PM enjoyed the hazy, dizzy feel of your poem, constance... sincere congrats and thanks for penning this for my contest Constance La France August 21, 2019 at 4:07 PM Nette, thanks for my placement ~