Wayra Vortex Blear

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I got on a train~ that became a neon trip; a wild vortex tunnel blear, a freak voyage obscure ! Oh, what is my DESTINATION ? _________________________ August 15, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/Wayra/Vortex Blear Copyright Protected, ID 19-1172-451-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, SECOND EDITION OF WAYRA sponsor, Nette Onclaud Fourth Place

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Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/23/2019 7:22:00 AM

Congratulations, Constance on your win.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2019 11:55:00 PM

Congratulations my dear friend. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/22/2019 4:59:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Constance. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2019 5:08:00 PM

I really like this one, Constance! I like how you gave it your "feeling" and Congrats!

John Gondolf

Date: 8/21/2019 3:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Constance, sometimes I feel like I'm traveling through life not knowing what my destination is. Guess I better figure it out pretty soon since I'm almost there. Hugs, John

Constance La France
Date: 8/21/2019 4:07:00 PM

John, my destination keeps changing so how will i ever arrive... thanks for the congrats !

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/21/2019 2:57:00 PM

enjoyed the hazy, dizzy feel of your poem, constance... sincere congrats and thanks for penning this for my contest

Constance La France
Date: 8/21/2019 4:07:00 PM

Nette, thanks for my placement ~