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Wayra Reveries of Ore

burrow of silence,
empty links worn - crimson flaws;
fearing bare hallow lone tracks-
veering with precision...
             to reveries of persian ore




SECOND EDITION OF WAYRA Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette OnClaud
Written: August 13, 2019

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Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/23/2019 7:19:00 AM

Congratulations, Lu on your fine win.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2019 11:51:00 PM

Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/22/2019 5:15:00 AM

Congrats on your podium finish, Lu Loo. Well done.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2019 1:09:00 AM

Wow Luloo, your entry really has depth and intrigue! I loved it! Congratulations on your deserving Second Placement! : ) xxoo

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/21/2019 8:06:00 PM

this is beautiful...you have a way with words, you always draw the reader in... congrats on your well deserved win :)

John Gondolf

Date: 8/21/2019 3:10:00 PM

Luloo, congrats on your win for this wonderful poem. John

Paul Callus

Date: 8/21/2019 2:57:00 PM

Yours is an impressive and creative take, Lu Loo. ~ Congratulations on a deserved win. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2019 2:12:00 PM

such a lovely description for this. Congrats, Lu Loo (love your picture with your name)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2019 1:54:00 PM

- Lovely written, L.L. :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/21/2019 1:54:00 PM

lou, i really dig this impressive poem alluding to a country, a polished empire now gone... enjoy your fine spot in my challenge as i greet you ' warm congrats'!

John Gondolf

Date: 8/15/2019 7:34:00 AM

Beautifully written, Luloo, good luck in the contest. John

Beautiful Scars
Date: 8/15/2019 1:53:00 PM