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burrow of silence,
empty links worn - crimson flaws;
fearing bare hallow lone tracks-
veering with precision...
             to reveries of persian ore




SECOND EDITION OF WAYRA Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette OnClaud
Written: August 13, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/23/2019 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations, Lu on your fine win.
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Date: 8/22/2019 11:51:00 PM
Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/22/2019 5:15:00 AM
Congrats on your podium finish, Lu Loo. Well done.
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Date: 8/22/2019 1:09:00 AM
Wow Luloo, your entry really has depth and intrigue! I loved it! Congratulations on your deserving Second Placement! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/21/2019 8:06:00 PM
this is beautiful...you have a way with words, you always draw the reader in... congrats on your well deserved win :)
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Date: 8/21/2019 3:10:00 PM
Luloo, congrats on your win for this wonderful poem. John
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Date: 8/21/2019 2:57:00 PM
Yours is an impressive and creative take, Lu Loo. ~ Congratulations on a deserved win. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/21/2019 2:12:00 PM
such a lovely description for this. Congrats, Lu Loo (love your picture with your name)
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Date: 8/21/2019 1:54:00 PM
- Lovely written, L.L. :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/21/2019 1:54:00 PM
lou, i really dig this impressive poem alluding to a country, a polished empire now gone... enjoy your fine spot in my challenge as i greet you ' warm congrats'!
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Date: 8/15/2019 7:34:00 AM
Beautifully written, Luloo, good luck in the contest. John
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/15/2019 1:53:00 PM
thank you John! :)-luloo
Date: 8/14/2019 9:10:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/15/2019 1:53:00 PM
thank you sweet Kim :)-luloo
Date: 8/14/2019 12:12:00 AM
Lu, very nice, I am just not sure how to do this contest, but tomorrow is another day ~
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/15/2019 1:52:00 PM
so true, I'm sure you will do great :)-luloo