Beautiful Scars Poet Free verse

Wayra Reveries of Ore

burrow of silence,
empty links worn - crimson flaws;
fearing bare hallow lone tracks-
veering with precision...
             to reveries of persian ore




SECOND EDITION OF WAYRA Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette OnClaud
Written: August 13, 2019

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Subimal Sinha-Roy August 23, 2019 at 7:19 AM Congratulations, Lu on your fine win.

Eve Roper August 22, 2019 at 11:51 PM Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier August 22, 2019 at 5:15 AM Congrats on your podium finish, Lu Loo. Well done.

Connie Marcum Wong August 22, 2019 at 1:09 AM Wow Luloo, your entry really has depth and intrigue! I loved it! Congratulations on your deserving Second Placement! : ) xxoo

Sandra Adams August 21, 2019 at 8:06 PM this is beautiful...you have a way with words, you always draw the reader in... congrats on your well deserved win :)

John Gondolf August 21, 2019 at 3:10 PM Luloo, congrats on your win for this wonderful poem. John

Paul Callus August 21, 2019 at 2:57 PM Yours is an impressive and creative take, Lu Loo. ~ Congratulations on a deserved win. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich August 21, 2019 at 2:12 PM such a lovely description for this. Congrats, Lu Loo (love your picture with your name)

Nette Onclaud August 21, 2019 at 1:54 PM lou, i really dig this impressive poem alluding to a country, a polished empire now gone... enjoy your fine spot in my challenge as i greet you ' warm congrats'!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 21, 2019 at 1:54 PM - Lovely written, L.L. :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Gondolf August 15, 2019 at 7:34 AM Beautifully written, Luloo, good luck in the contest. John Beautiful Scars August 15, 2019 at 1:53 PM thank you John! :)-luloo

Kim Rodrigues August 14, 2019 at 9:10 AM Beautiful! Beautiful Scars August 15, 2019 at 1:53 PM thank you sweet Kim :)-luloo

Constance La France August 14, 2019 at 12:12 AM Lu, very nice, I am just not sure how to do this contest, but tomorrow is another day ~ Beautiful Scars August 15, 2019 at 1:52 PM so true, I'm sure you will do great :)-luloo