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Way Too Old For Him

The cowboy leaning on the counter took an interest in my sister. I watched him watching her, and I felt uncomfortable. Another guy sidled closer to me. I was instantly irritated. Just because I am in a bar does not mean I want to be bothered. She is a bit mad, isn’t she? He asked. I looked at his face. He was smiling, but not leering like the cowboy. He had an honest face, he was young like her. Are you into madness? I asked. He gave me a lingering look. I could be enticed. I threw back my head and laughed. I am way too old for him.

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Date: 3/11/2022 7:11:00 PM
Ah, the mystic of it all. Yes, why can't one simply be in a bar to have a drink. I have a Bourbon Street incident somewhat like this. I'll share it sometime.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/12/2022 1:22:00 PM
True!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2022 5:01:00 AM
If I ever have a liquor drink it will be at home because at a bar they cost ten times more.
Date: 3/11/2022 9:09:00 AM
Interesting tale ~ crazy people out there; Proceed With Caution! :)Paulette
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2022 5:01:00 AM
No kidding!
Date: 3/11/2022 4:30:00 AM
But that hat,,,,,that hat and that weathered face .....
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2022 5:01:00 AM
I see you have also seen the 1960's Marlboro man!

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