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Way Too Late

No creature so dumb No child or visitor so numb That they do not despair At the tension stabbing the air When there exists hate By then it's way too late To salvage a marriage gone wrong ~ Better to say, 'We tried, now so long'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/23/2018 4:01:00 AM
Sadly there is far too much hate everywhere, no one wants to compromise any more, its my way or no way. Tom. Hope you and your family have a wonderful Christmas Gershon and best wishes for the coming new year.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/23/2018 2:49:00 PM
No wants to compromise ---- or apologize, it seems...All the best, Tom!
Date: 12/22/2018 11:54:00 PM
Well crafted poem, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/23/2018 2:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line
Date: 12/22/2018 10:33:00 PM
Brevity with bite. x
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/23/2018 2:47:00 PM
Swallow hard...
Date: 12/22/2018 10:18:00 PM
Better to suffocate the hate than to continue to feed the pain-
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/23/2018 2:47:00 PM
Yup. You're right. ~ Gershon
Date: 12/22/2018 9:46:00 PM
Sometimes marital strife becomes unbearable when people try to hold onto a love that has left their hearts, Gershon. Really like you rhyme, Carolyn
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/23/2018 2:47:00 PM
So true, Carolyn. Thank you for your kind words and support. Best wishes, Gershon

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