Way Out On the Lake

Walking way out on the lake
  atop a cement-block pier
Waves lap at its sturdy girders
  fish swim up to the surface, so near

Tiny specks below the horizon
  boats sail near a shore far away
The water looks cold and foreboding
  diminished light at the end of the day

Fresh winds spring up, the sun dials down
  my jacket's pulled tight next my frame
A sliver of a pale moon rises
  Will tomorrow be just the same
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 5:01 PM
This makes me miss Chicago
Baker Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 9:58 PM
Nice rhyme and a good wy to end a day down on the pier observing nature. Bill
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