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Way of the River

My waters had their genesis in the sea, A path created was fashioned for me; It can't be changed for there my toil Winds through life in a twisting coil. My waters end where they began, Where life takes hold of its brief span; To return to that enigmatic source, Where once again I flow on my course. The fragrance from the flowers as I pass, Scent the air with whispers from the grass; And my waters run down as they go Over gemlike stones my streamlets flow. And the tears that pour from my sad eyes, Go back to the sea where all rivers rise; And if my soul should suddenly leap Over a ledge to kiss violets that sleep; Then I will wander back to the sea, The mother source that set me free. And if those riddles I must keep, Let me not complain, but sweep On to the bitter end without fear, Knowing that He who walks with me is near.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/24/2011 4:56:00 PM
i love the ties between you ,,our creator,,and this earth,,,i bet we will both see this poem,,on the walls,,in heaven some day,,that is how powerful our words are,,never forget what is bound here is bound in heaven,,and our great works will follow us there...god bless you my friend....
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Date: 9/15/2011 1:51:00 PM
Nicely worded with huge expectation, that I agree with you and that is........my friend. "Thanks for your comment on " Faint Future". I think future becomes present when I reap it but no one can deny frustration even for a second in life. So, future is faint, I think my friend. Sorry for clarification of my feeling. bl
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Date: 9/13/2011 9:09:00 PM
The calming vision of moving water flowing as it will, over rocks , out to the sea, through life, and carrying the writer and reader along. A lovely verse Elizabeth. Yourself a water baby perhaps? cheers Margaret
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Date: 9/13/2011 6:06:00 PM
Elizabeth, if one of my poems made you cry this one makes me weep with astonishment at the your intrinsic poetic talent. And by the way, I was born in St. Croix, Virgin Islands; spent 20 years sailing the world in the Navy and currently reside in Alexandria, Egypt - on the shores of the Mediterrean Ocean. I own a home near the Gulf beaches in Tampa and hope to die there someday - near the white sandy beaches I grew up on. The ocean and her sister rivers mean everything to me.
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Date: 9/12/2011 6:09:00 AM
After reading almost 20 of your fine poems mostly rhyme - nice rhyming by the way as I do truly enjoy them well. You likely inspire much poets on this site imagination as you do me. You combined life and Mother Nature all so creatively in your piece here. Honestly your one of my favorite writers on this site. 7up! Please keep up the wonderful writing my friend!
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Date: 9/12/2011 6:13:00 AM
Excuse me - On the third line it's suppose to read ... You likely inspire a lot of poets on this site with your imagination as you do me.
Date: 9/12/2011 3:51:00 AM
This is superb! You carry panache at expressing life through nature. Your poetry is inspiration to amateurs like myself.
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Date: 9/12/2011 1:55:00 AM
i need oxygen as i am breathless,elize...a deep spiritual one this is; i feel it in my heart !... as always your words carry a flow of sentiments that are very special to me.. ever so lovely :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/12/2011 1:37:00 AM
Wow! This could have been written by one of the masters from the British Romantic period. I love the flow, the message, the rhyme. And those last four lines are what keep me going, Elizabeth. A favorite for me as well. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/11/2011 11:00:00 PM
Favorite i love this poem 7up waters of life pave the path for each of us.
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Date: 9/11/2011 10:56:00 PM
thanks Liz for visting you're right there is nothing new from me - I have been trying to clean up a mess left by Tropical storm Lee and spent the day digging fence post holes...I've been putting my efforts on the book of poetry I am trying to develop, and haven't written anything new...thanks for being interested and I'll get back to writing ... someday, hopefully soon, Luv
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Date: 9/11/2011 10:38:00 PM
Liz, another image filled rendering for the eternal book of poetry via the ocean of your own soulful wanderings. And O by the way, yer FAR TOO KIND with the comliments you've been sending my way lately. Abundant thanks for staying in touch. God bless and again, this is a LOVELY poem. Smiles, Terry
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Date: 9/11/2011 9:20:00 PM
there is great love and faith in your poem Elizabeth and lovely imagery that flows . Yes My friend Ed dod know how to live obviously. very astute of you to realize that that is what it is. Kowing how to live. To live abundantly in the ways of Him who walks with us as your poem says
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Date: 9/11/2011 9:09:00 PM
Wonderful creative writelovely Lady Elizabeth.. the blood in our veins comes from the sea without blood their is no life..beautiful verse deep meanings....wishing you a brighter day..with love old Jack
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Date: 9/11/2011 9:07:00 PM
liz, i am having a look at your poems now only.. as easy flowing and meaningful as they are well-crafted..thnx for sharing
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Date: 9/11/2011 7:13:00 PM
Ps. Smile, *^_^* “Just Swinging Back By My Dear Blessed & Beautiful Elizabeth! *^_^* Yesss, Twas Nice to Hear From Your Lovely Light &, Thank You, My Dear *^_^* For Bringing A Piece of Pretty, Into My Day!” === My Love Unto Your Precious Beauty, As Always, Jasper *
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Date: 9/11/2011 6:28:00 PM
I realllly like this one Liz
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Date: 9/11/2011 6:21:00 PM
What lovely metaphorical writing,elizabeth. These lines were particularly impressive and they LEPT out at me: And if my soul should suddenly leap Over a ledge to kiss violets that sleep. Awesome!
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Date: 9/11/2011 5:12:00 PM
Very well done again Elizabeth. Very deep to the soul feeling comes over the reader. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 9/11/2011 3:45:00 PM
The river flows in all our lives. It's the only way the soul survives. So melenchaly, or in joy. It doesn't matter if your a girl or a boy. Jesus paddles our canoe through the in-between. So that the pastures will always be green.
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Date: 9/11/2011 2:25:00 PM
A very deep write elizabeth, A change of tack from your happier poems. Always a challenge to any writer. the pen has dipped into your soul here. I hope it is just fiction. Steven
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Date: 9/11/2011 1:37:00 PM
Deepest feeling penned with perfect words, Way of River with life's combination is worthy. Thanks for sharing. bl
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Date: 9/11/2011 1:33:00 PM
solid beauty! enjoyed reading, elizabeth, thanks. ~N
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Date: 9/11/2011 12:09:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “A Bit Too Much Melancholy & Not Enough Hope Perhaps, My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Elizabeth! *^_^* Yet I Do Find Something Recognized Amid As Always A Brilliants Creative Canvas Although, I Find Nothing Enigmatic Within My Own Blessings Source *^_^* My Beautiful Ladyb *^_^* Ride High Atop Those Waves Into, Heavens Loving Arms *^_^* This Crest of Glories Light!” === My Love Unto Your Priceless Beauty, Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 9/11/2011 9:35:00 AM
Another remarkable poem! You're on fire lady, and I think that we do share a common wavelength as I have been working on a poem about the Mississippi but put it aside when my poetic drought began. For today's perusing enjoyment try "My Green lady" which should be read in conjunction with "Lady Loneliness".
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