Way I Feel About Her

She walks in the room
My knees buckled
Her walk tenses
My every single muscle

When I see her my heart races a million k run
She does things that make her the shine of my sun
I sleep and only of her, I dream
Me and her together...That is the scene

A girl like that would change me
Into a guy that wants one girl instead of three
She could change me
I won't think of hittin', quitin', or anything filthy

If she were mine, Nothing but love
No pain, no heartache, just love, love, and love
She has the body of an hour glass
Omg if she was a teacher, I'd always go to class


Her beauty leaves the talkitive, mute
Her love is my only pursuit
Just wanna' call her, my love, boo, baby, or ma
But most of all I wanna' call her Mrs. François  (Franswa)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/27/2011 7:49:00 PM
C'est magnifique mon ami. Cupid didn't use a bow when he shot his arrow at you. He used a bazooka!
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Date: 1/4/2011 8:06:00 AM
a lovely write, cute ending , enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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Date: 12/29/2010 9:02:00 PM
Cute love poem, Freddy.Congratulations on your win in this contest! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/29/2010 4:33:00 AM
Congratulations Freddy on your win in Paula Swanson's "Just Poetry" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2010 4:14:00 PM
Well Mr. Franswa, just mind your manners and listen to your Ma and you may just win this pretty girl you saw. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/27/2010 3:24:00 AM
Freddy, you better tell her how you feel.. Strong emotions.. I enjoyed this ;-)
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