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Way I Feel About Her

She walks in the room My knees buckled Her walk tenses My every single muscle When I see her my heart races a million k run She does things that make her the shine of my sun I sleep and only of her, I dream Me and her together...That is the scene A girl like that would change me Into a guy that wants one girl instead of three She could change me I won't think of hittin', quitin', or anything filthy If she were mine, Nothing but love No pain, no heartache, just love, love, and love She has the body of an hour glass Omg if she was a teacher, I'd always go to class Her beauty leaves the talkitive, mute Her love is my only pursuit Just wanna' call her, my love, boo, baby, or ma But most of all I wanna' call her Mrs. François (Franswa)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/27/2011 7:49:00 PM
C'est magnifique mon ami. Cupid didn't use a bow when he shot his arrow at you. He used a bazooka!
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Date: 1/4/2011 8:06:00 AM
a lovely write, cute ending , enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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Date: 12/29/2010 9:02:00 PM
Cute love poem, Freddy.Congratulations on your win in this contest! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/29/2010 4:33:00 AM
Congratulations Freddy on your win in Paula Swanson's "Just Poetry" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2010 4:14:00 PM
Well Mr. Franswa, just mind your manners and listen to your Ma and you may just win this pretty girl you saw. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/27/2010 3:24:00 AM
Freddy, you better tell her how you feel.. Strong emotions.. I enjoyed this ;-)
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