Way Back When I Was Ten

A canopy of innocence, invisible to me
hung over playful joy shielding all that would come to be.
The world was mud and grass and trees, oh, puddles,swings and bikes
shrieking, shouting, rampant running anywhere we liked.
A watchful eye as we ran by from neighbours way back when
our life we weaved in make-believe, way back when I was ten.

Fights and tears did not last long if anyone fell out
back to being friends next day, the rift forgot about.
We romped and larked, new friendships sparked wherever we would hang
our open door to rich and poor within our merry gang.
No hatred spite or bigotry existed  in us then
for that was what the grown-ups did, way back when I was ten.

I'd often wander by myself for hours through the fields
and check the schoolhouse orchard, help myself to what it yields.
Blindly unafraid, there were no barriers to me
'till twilight fell, exploring everything that I could see.
No warnings from our elders about talking to strange men
the world seemed a much safer place way back when I was ten.

Just like my photo album, everything seemed black and white,
a mother's touch could heal the world, make everything alright.
Dad put food on table, Mum made sure our stomach's full
safe in our family unit we all felt invincible.
Sometimes I look around and think how nice to go again
back to that summer bubble where I lived when I was ten.

For contest 'Way back when I was ten', sponsor Kelly Deschler
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Gentry Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this awesome trip down memory lane. You described the same way of life I had at 10. :) A 7
Sergi Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 10:07 AM
Hi Viv: Congratulations on a big win and I loved the photo!
Wigley Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 11:20 PM
Thanks, Ralph, that photo was in our 'pre-Brylcreem' phase. Now, I use furniture polish. Regards, Viv
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February 17, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Viv, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love LINDA
A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 2:05 AM
anytime
Wigley Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 11:20 PM
Thanks Linda, I appreciate your visits, as always, Viv x
Onclaud Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 7:27 AM
i like the innocent feel of this, viv.. big congrats!
Wigley Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 11:21 PM
Thanks, nette, an innocence now swallowed up by technology for our youngsters, sadly. Viv x
Murray Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 7:16 AM
I would not mind trying four for a change... Were you that boy next door I never met??
Wigley Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 11:22 PM
Yes, Jean, I am, otherwise you'd be sitting on my knee right now. Viv x
Lane Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 5:32 AM
I absolutely loved reading about your childhood, and thank you for the photo... you were such a little cutie...still are. Congratulations! (not for being cute~for the win) haha.
Wigley Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 11:22 PM
Well, Lin, you're just cute. So there :) . Viv x
Wigley Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 12:20 AM
Well done, me, a first place after a long gap. Pull your finger out. Regards, Me.
Lane Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 5:30 AM
You always make me laugh, Viv.
Wigley Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 12:20 AM
Sorry, Me, I've been so busy recently. God, I can nag sometimes, I don't know how I put up with me. Regards, Me
Turner Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 9:23 PM
Beautiful poem, Viv. A well deserved first place. Congratulations. Would you really like to do it all again?
Wigley Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 12:19 AM
Knowing then what I know now, Daniel, yes I would- enjoy my past and change my future, so I would. Thanks for dropping by. regards, Viv
Deschler Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 7:52 PM
You've shared some wonderful memories with us, Viv. I really enjoyed this beautiful, nostalgic poem... Congratulations on a first place win! Thanks for entering, Viv :)
Wigley Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 12:18 AM
Thanks, Kelly, I enjoy your contest subject matter, it inspires. Viv x
Laurie Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 6:34 PM
G'day Viv ... amazing poem mate. I feel like it's written about me - thanks Viv and good luck - Lindsay
Wigley Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 10:49 PM
I'm sure that your childhood involved much tree climbing Lindsay, since you have Crocodiles.... thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Callus Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 3:39 PM
Excellent, Viv....beautiful...perhaps because I could quite easily have recounted these very same escapades myself!! Those were the days which today's children will never be able to comprehend! We did not have wings...but how we flew! Thank you for sharing these memories. ~ Regards // paul
Wigley Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 10:48 PM
Indeed, Paul, today's children have lost several years of that foundation of innocence, which cushioned us- they grow up way too fast, and consequently we read much of anorexia, self harm, body shaming and other emotional damage. Very sad. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Delaney Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 11:53 PM
This is wonderful Viv: Sounds so much like my world when I was ten. So well written A sure winner. suz
Wigley Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 12:32 AM
...and what a lovely world it was, Suz. Thanks for dropping by, Viv x
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