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Waving By-Bye

He clipped another one out of the news The head on collision of Mr. Bob Hughes Tacking it to his wall, he laughed to himself Those trusting fools, he’d so kindly “helped” He never thought he would like his work But being a garbage man sure had its perks! When stopped on a curve or on top of a hill He waved people on, instantly thrilled If another car was coming from the opposite direction They made the most beautiful metal-to-metal connections And the best part about it, was that if they survived, They had no memory of him waving them by! His wall’s almost full of people like Bob Trying to get home, or on to their jobs So don’t let his uniform fool your eyes Just ask yourself this before you pass by - Is the smiling man on the garbage truck Helping me out, or setting me up? If you just wait, seconds, minutes, to go, Instead of trusting someone you don’t even know You’ll have a better chance of staying alive And not ending up on the wall of foolish drivers, Where he especially loves pictures of smashed up cars, To post above his articles, like golden stars 9/28/11

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Date: 4/6/2013 6:32:00 PM
Love the imagery-Skat
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Date: 4/4/2013 3:12:00 PM
Hola Susan*<3 Congratulations with your wonderful and lovely poem. Sending small simple smiles all over the soup. Love-Linda
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Date: 4/4/2013 11:21:00 AM
I had a fender bender with a garbage truck last month, was it caused by the snow and ice or was I just another golden star? LOL....Excellent write and win! Hugs
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Date: 4/1/2013 8:44:00 AM
congrats on your win Susan
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Date: 4/1/2013 6:46:00 AM
Yeah its scary there are really people like this out there. Great win congrats. Donna
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Date: 4/1/2013 4:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win Susan~ A.O
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Date: 3/31/2013 8:26:00 PM
this was so scary, Susan. And you concluded at the end with a great stanza. congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/3/2011 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Fine Line" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2011 2:51:00 PM
Congrats Susan on your win.Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy, Susan
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Date: 10/1/2011 9:19:00 AM
Hi! Susan,, how are you? I have not seen you much on the soup... i was wondering about that contest of yours,,, anyways,,,,, i don't know about that line,,, but i try my hardest not to cross anything evill thank you for sharing,,,p.d.
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:12:00 AM
Great poem, love it. Lee
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Date: 9/30/2011 8:55:00 PM
Creative approach to a creative and multifaceted take on the theme. Wow, Susan, sure do like crawlin' around in that mind of yours! Thanks so much for the write and for your support of the contest. Beauty eve to ya! Namaste~N
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Date: 9/29/2011 6:19:00 PM
I really enjoyed this Susan, you are a wonderful writer, best of luck in the contest and I want to thank you so very much for my win in your couplet contest, I am very honored and pleased ~~
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Date: 9/28/2011 11:22:00 PM
wow Susan an intricate and touching story.. luv the opening lines and stanza.. setting the tone of this magnifico write ..luv..
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Date: 9/28/2011 10:36:00 PM
wow... harsh... do believe I'll sleep on this one. Thanks very muchly, Susan~N
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