Waves of Ripples

his furtive glance caused waves of ripples, disturbing the calm of my mind.

Feb. 19.2023

~ Placed First~

A Ripple to Me.2. Poetry Contest
Sponsor- JCB. Brul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Gasun Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:35 AM
Wow! This is magical my dear friend Valsa. I love it. Big Congrats on your well-deserved top win! Thank you so much for sharing. Blessings to you and your golden pen always. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:40 PM
Ooh! Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 3:56 PM
nicely done. Congrats
Ray Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 9:32 AM
a magic moment wonderfully captured....one can add no more to that praise....loved it
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 9:02 AM
A furtive glance will do that every time--best to you, Valsa.
Baker Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 8:03 AM
As your poetry strums the strings of my soul, dear poet. Lovely Monoku, Valsa. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Brul Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 7:55 AM
This is so tender and romantic! Congratulations.
Poet Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 5:56 AM
So poetic and very well crafted, dear Valsa, Congratulations on your top contest win.
Daniel Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 3:04 AM
Really well done, Valsa:)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 1:15 AM
Must be tall and handsome :)
Chuuk Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 7:39 PM
Gorgeous… :)
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