Waves of Emotion

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Drift through the ephemeral sea of fantasy When the ink melts, the pen behaves scantily Dewdrops are our delight, fresh and pearly My lack of chatter protects me from vanity However, I am not a hopeless case of insanity I'm buried, however, in my distorted chastity Treatment for emotional clarity and sanity. Written: December 27, 2022 BRIAN STRAND no 1165 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/10/2023 10:02:00 AM

Wonderful monorhyme Lasaad that expresses the deepest of emotions through your most creative rhyming words! Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you my friend in the new reality you birth through "sanity!"

Valsa George

Date: 1/5/2023 5:09:00 AM

Your poems are too deep for my evaluation. But your bizarre and offbeat images capture attention. Love your exquisite creativity. Congratulations on your great win in Brian's contest!

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/3/2023 11:43:00 AM

Dear Lasaad, your poem is expressive and exquisite! I adore the alluring beauty of your creative imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Edward Ibeh

Date: 1/3/2023 7:38:00 AM

Gorgeous piece, Lasaad! Heartiest congratulations on your fine win!

David Kavanagh

Date: 12/29/2022 11:48:00 AM

Surreal poetry Lasaad, I’m not sure exactly what picture you portray here, but the spectre of sex appeal by Dali pops into my head, it’s as if the grotesque image is explaining what it is, to the boy looking up at it, hope that makes sense to you, brilliant writing, cheers David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2022 10:24:00 AM

Creative work. I am sure not so easy to write with so many rhymes. I like the attached snapshot. Thanks for sharing and for your nice review of my work. Sara