Sotto Poet Poet Monorhyme

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Waves of Emotion

Drift through the ephemeral sea of fantasy
When the ink melts, the pen behaves scantily
Dewdrops are our delight, fresh and pearly
My lack of chatter protects me from vanity
However, I am not a hopeless case of insanity
I'm buried, however, in my distorted chastity
Treatment for emotional clarity and sanity.

Written: December 27, 2022


BRIAN STRAND no 1165 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Sam Kauffman January 10, 2023 at 10:02 AM Wonderful monorhyme Lasaad that expresses the deepest of emotions through your most creative rhyming words! Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you my friend in the new reality you birth through "sanity!"

Valsa George January 5, 2023 at 5:09 AM Your poems are too deep for my evaluation. But your bizarre and offbeat images capture attention. Love your exquisite creativity. Congratulations on your great win in Brian's contest!

Susan Ashley January 3, 2023 at 11:43 AM Dear Lasaad, your poem is expressive and exquisite! I adore the alluring beauty of your creative imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Edward Ibeh January 3, 2023 at 7:38 AM Gorgeous piece, Lasaad! Heartiest congratulations on your fine win!

David Kavanagh December 29, 2022 at 11:48 AM Surreal poetry Lasaad, I’m not sure exactly what picture you portray here, but the spectre of sex appeal by Dali pops into my head, it’s as if the grotesque image is explaining what it is, to the boy looking up at it, hope that makes sense to you, brilliant writing, cheers David

Sara Kendrick December 29, 2022 at 10:24 AM Creative work. I am sure not so easy to write with so many rhymes. I like the attached snapshot. Thanks for sharing and for your nice review of my work. Sara

Paula Goldsmith December 27, 2022 at 11:47 AM A magical write. Love It. A pretty picture. Wish that was my window. Have a Blessed New Year 2023.............

Tom Cunningham December 27, 2022 at 10:23 AM A brilliantly composed monorhyme Lasaad, it just rolls off the tongue. Tom

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2022 at 9:59 AM Nicely done in monorhyme, Sotto Poet

Demetrios Trifiatis December 27, 2022 at 6:58 AM What a profound Monorhyme! The imagery is outstanding and the language is superb! A fave!