Waves' Ladder

I stepped on the waves,

The sunset's palaces to reach--


Asleep weary sun! 







© Demetrios Trifiatis
     23 October 2022

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Bill Baker

October 26, 2022 at 7:37 AM

The imagery show the meaning of your Haiku. Thank you for sharing, Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 23, 2022 at 12:32 PM

- A beautiful haiku, my friend :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

October 23, 2022 at 8:49 AM

Excellent work here, my friend Demetrios; you've managed to convey the ontological properties of both the waves and the sunset in your wonderful words. Have enjoyed this morning's reading. Blessings