Waves' Ladder

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" WEARY SUN " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of ocean, twilight, nature and sky

I stepped on the waves,

The sunset's palaces to reach--


Asleep weary sun! 







© Demetrios Trifiatis
     23 October 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/26/2022 7:37:00 AM

The imagery show the meaning of your Haiku. Thank you for sharing, Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2022 12:32:00 PM

- A beautiful haiku, my friend :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/23/2022 8:49:00 AM

Excellent work here, my friend Demetrios; you've managed to convey the ontological properties of both the waves and the sunset in your wonderful words. Have enjoyed this morning's reading. Blessings

Michael Tor

Date: 10/23/2022 1:34:00 AM

Wonderfully written my friend. Enjoyed reading this morning... Blessings your way...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/23/2022 7:19:00 AM

Thank you so much for your gracious comment, my dearest friend, Michael. God bless you as always!