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He stood beside me, Wading in the waves of dreams And in childlike pose; Drifting on that fall day, Above the sinking sand And below any care of pretentious doubt. I stood my back to him, Hearing his laughter Dance to ocean's wind; Keeping my heart afloat And my mind at bay. I can still see the waves. We were children then, As close as two kindred spirits Could be. Now in our dormant thirties; We are strangers, Mere castaways on the beaches of time And strangers On the island of productivity. Too busy for a phone call, Too idle for a visit, Too shallow for forgiveness. But I can still see the waves. I wonder, Does he remember? We were thick as two washed up Sandollars; Stranded, Linked, Hidden behind the rocks. As close as two seagulls; Hovering, Gliding, Riding the breeze of paradise. How I miss those days, Those memories, Still paintings in the shadows Of my mind; Im not sure he if can recall Those thumbnails of time, Those pictures framed In the attic of our frozen heart. Im sure he's blinded by hate, Still drowning in pain.... But I can still see the waves. 11/14/2015 Mike Hufford

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Date: 11/18/2015 3:57:00 PM
Mike, you created quite a story for a simple picture. Your imaginative pen is well worthy of depicting Eve's oil. Congratulations, I think this piece is brilliantly real...:), jill
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Date: 11/18/2015 12:43:00 PM
Excellent, Mike! Your interpretation of this picture is very creative, and touching! Your first poem to Soup is already making waves:) Congratulations on a much deserved win. // paul
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Mike Hufford
Date: 11/18/2015 1:11:00 PM
ha ha thank you so much. im very touched and loved the opportunity. completely humbled and grateful
Date: 11/18/2015 7:57:00 AM
Very touching piece, congratulations.
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Mike Hufford
Date: 11/18/2015 11:10:00 AM
Aww thank you
Date: 11/17/2015 9:51:00 PM
Mike, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT
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Mike Hufford
Date: 11/18/2015 11:11:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 11/17/2015 9:44:00 PM
Thank you so very much for composing and submitting a poem in my contest, Mike, congratulations on your win!!! My husband and I truly enjoyed the poem. Hugs Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/18/2015 3:02:00 PM
I'm honored that you were able to share your inner emotions to one of my portraits and a very good one at that!!!!! Hugs Eve
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Mike Hufford
Date: 11/18/2015 11:10:00 AM
Thank you so very much. Im so shocked and smiling, this was my first poem. I was just so inspired by your painting and it was feelings I needed to let out. Thank you so very much for the contest
Date: 11/17/2015 8:14:00 PM
I like the style you used, Mike. Congratulations.
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Mike Hufford
Date: 11/18/2015 11:11:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 11/17/2015 6:50:00 PM
Congratulations Mike
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Mike Hufford
Date: 11/18/2015 11:11:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 11/17/2015 6:09:00 PM
I had a huge lump in my throat reading this Mike - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Mike Hufford
Date: 11/18/2015 11:08:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 11/16/2015 11:10:00 PM
Hi Mike, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Mike Hufford
Date: 11/18/2015 11:08:00 AM
Thank you so much. I love it here so far, the support is amazing.
Date: 11/16/2015 2:24:00 PM
thank you everyone. i am so humbled by this community and just looking to grow as a poet. Thank you for taking the time.
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Date: 11/15/2015 12:25:00 PM
Hi Mike, this is such an excellent piece that makes me look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/14/2015 9:42:00 PM
A beautiful poem Mike, deep. Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Mike Hufford
Date: 11/14/2015 9:49:00 PM
Thank you very much and thank you for the greeting. I found this site and was inspired. Im joping to create more and meet new artist and their work. Thank you so much. Hug back. Im still trying to figure this site out lol

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