Mad Hu Poet Free verse

Waves

Last evening,

Standing on the beach,

Watching the waves making rhythmic beat.


                                               Suddenly it came with wide,white grin

                                               Tenderly touching and left again.

Was about to leave,

When it said-

Hey gal,

don't go too far.

I will come back again.

And

There it was,  with the wide,white grin.

                                                
                                                   Waves so amazing.

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Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 10:42 AM mad Hu, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A December 22, 2015 at 8:11 PM mad Hu :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Ravi Sathasivam October 8, 2012 at 8:00 AM Amazing write. Like waves, let your poems splash here. Tfs Mad Hu October 8, 2012 at 9:17 PM Thank you:)

Ravindra K Kapoor September 15, 2012 at 10:29 AM Very well written Poem Mad hu. Your waves definitely created a rhythmic beat with the sound of splashing waves. Beautiful write. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....Madhu Mad Hu September 17, 2012 at 12:19 AM thanks:)

Robert Pettit September 5, 2012 at 10:25 PM Good idea to personify the ocean waves. Good write. Mad Hu September 6, 2012 at 9:50 PM Thanks:)

Harry Horsman September 5, 2012 at 8:14 AM And like your waves, one indeed will keep coming back to your poetry. awesome. Mad Hu September 5, 2012 at 9:23 PM Thank you:)for your kind comments

Nette Onclaud September 4, 2012 at 3:42 AM i feel the tender splash of your words, mad.. truly splendid as always!..:) huggs! Mad Hu September 4, 2012 at 3:56 AM Thank you for the kind comments:)

Andrea Dietrich September 3, 2012 at 10:37 AM I love this one, the waves personified. a great poem with a surprising feel to it! Mad Hu September 4, 2012 at 3:56 AM Thank you:)

Lucilla Carrillo September 3, 2012 at 6:54 AM great write about the waves, they are beautiful. Thanks for stoping by. Lucilla Mad Hu September 4, 2012 at 3:55 AM Thank you too:)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2012 at 4:54 AM Watching the waves ..... I like it too.... A well written poem. - Xoxo / / Anne-Lise :) Mad Hu September 4, 2012 at 3:55 AM :)THANK YOU

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 2, 2012 at 11:27 PM I so luv the beach and waves which crest to different shapes and designa like the fluid motion of your words luv .. most enjoyable creation Mad Hu .. Mad Hu September 3, 2012 at 2:45 AM Thank you:)