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Waves - Split Haiku

flushed swells at sunset inflamed by pink skirted clouds… -waves- emote crimson whorls rainbow wisped currents preen and crest as daylight wanes … -waves- fan their peacock tails

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Date: 4/9/2016 1:03:00 PM
That must have been glorious with peacock tails in the waves..Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 3/29/2016 7:44:00 AM
amazing imagery David I especially love the peacock tails:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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