Wave of Fantasy

" WAVE OF FANTASY"
She glittered in the dark, white hooves stepping on white stones
she was not far from her home when she knew - she was not alone 
unicorns don't stare, this is what his mother taught him.
more beautiful than any mare, bare white, in the snow 
he saw her standing there, drinking all alone
a glimpse is all it took - his heart forbear from falling for her
he crept underneath the silk waterfall
the moon had never shone so bright, it was as if she was the only person in the world that night.
Make haste! I must speak to her!
Running down the mountain he took flight.
It is not fate, for you to be alone tonight
he told her this and held his breath - 
she replied with no resent
send me flowers, pale babies breath, I shall find you in the air.
but alas she could only find him in her dreams!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Chuuk Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 7:06 AM
Fabulous work, and congratulation on your win!
Beckman  Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 10:20 AM
Thanks!
Peck Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 11:27 AM
Ohh, so beautiful, Nancy. Your imagination is lovely. Congratulations!
Beckman  Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 10:20 AM
Thanks!
Rose  Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 12:51 AM
I asked you to take me away on a wave of of fantasy, and so you did. Thank you for joining my contest and congrats on your win, this was a fantastical journey. I would not have missed it for the world !
Beckman  Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 10:20 AM
Thank you! :)
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Enjoyed the journey through your words, Nancy. A lovely dream.
Beckman  Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 10:21 AM
Thanks!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace