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Wave of Fantasy

" WAVE OF FANTASY" She glittered in the dark, white hooves stepping on white stones she was not far from her home when she knew - she was not alone unicorns don't stare, this is what his mother taught him. more beautiful than any mare, bare white, in the snow he saw her standing there, drinking all alone a glimpse is all it took - his heart forbear from falling for her he crept underneath the silk waterfall the moon had never shone so bright, it was as if she was the only person in the world that night. Make haste! I must speak to her! Running down the mountain he took flight. It is not fate, for you to be alone tonight he told her this and held his breath - she replied with no resent send me flowers, pale babies breath, I shall find you in the air. but alas she could only fly in her dreams!

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Date: 2/16/2023 7:06:00 AM
Fabulous work, and congratulation on your win!
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 2/16/2023 10:20:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 2/15/2023 11:27:00 AM
Ohh, so beautiful, Nancy. Your imagination is lovely. Congratulations!
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 2/16/2023 10:20:00 AM
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Date: 2/15/2023 12:51:00 AM
I asked you to take me away on a wave of of fantasy, and so you did. Thank you for joining my contest and congrats on your win, this was a fantastical journey. I would not have missed it for the world !
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 2/16/2023 10:20:00 AM
Thank you! :)
Date: 2/8/2023 5:46:00 AM
Enjoyed the journey through your words, Nancy. A lovely dream.
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 2/16/2023 10:21:00 AM
Thanks!

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