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We move like the waves of the ocean We move so smooth And high Until we crash When the wave hits land It has nothing more to live for It has been soaked up by the sand It has been stepped on By the feet of the happy children It has gone deeper than the depths of the sand Just barely reaching hell But not falling into the pit of fire But right as it starts dripping Into the hands of the devil It remembers what life was like Before it crashed into the land

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Date: 7/4/2017 6:37:00 PM
Beautiful poem Avi..,"Until we crash".. favourite..with lots of love..All the best to you.
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Date: 4/6/2017 3:26:00 AM
What a beautiful metaphorical comparison you make here. I loves sea and waves, and I love your first poem on PoetrySoup. Welcome :)
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Avi Maryles
Date: 4/6/2017 8:14:00 AM
Thank you so much

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