There is another "Watery Sun" by another poet on Poetry Soup, but the idea of the title was mine and we both put out our poems on the same day.
A watery sun is on my mind - the lovely one seen not long ago. We were out on a boat in Monmouthshire, and you had persuaded me to row. The sun was going in decline... It must have been around four o'clock. I wanted to stay a long while yet, but you said no, it is time to dock. But as usual, I had my way. (The watery sun dropped very low.) Soon we were in darkness there. Yes, a foolish darkness, don't you know. It was my fault, I see it now, that our day was not a happy one, and every time I think of it, I have in mind the watery sun. 11/25/2015
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