James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Watersnake

This miracle snake
Never seen before
In translucent form
Not on earths floor
 
Body of water
Gravity made
Missile its creator
Clarity it's grade
 
This blind water cobra
Soluble shaped stance
Rising
Will have you entranced
 
Reddened mix
In it's water base
A freak of nature
In this heavenly place


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Carol Sunshine Brown June 30, 2009 at 10:37 AM Awesome. Excellent writing James. Love, Carol

Charlene Bird June 30, 2009 at 10:25 AM Hey James, this is an interesting creative lay here friend, I am deathly afraid of any snakes period. I have had some terrifying run in with them throughout my life and although they have some purpose in this life I can't see that or the beauty in them at all. But, it is good that you can for, all of nature has it's beauty I suppose, just others look at it differently.