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Watershed

Beneath waves that concede a change of life
shapes of shifting forms
hidden in ocean depths
murky coloration of perpetual flux
as fish without eyes cruise crustacean cousins
in a midnight zone of black
midst trouble changing sea acidity
flowing currents once flush with species

It's peaceful at the bottom in what can't be measured
for the deeper one goes the familiar disappears
like seaweed that displaces coral
turbulent reef on the cusp of scant recovery

Underwater paradise,
surface waves of imposing rhythm 
forms that wash to shore
life in the voracious jaws of damage
what sustains a teardrop
when anchored eyes open






Poem composed; June 17, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/28/2021 9:07:00 AM
A banquet of food for thought Brian. I like the image of the serenity in the depths of the ocean but also the image of the ocean weeping. Our oceans are precious treasures and we are their guardians! Congratulations on your win.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/28/2021 9:25:00 AM
Hello Sam, Thanks very much for the thumbs up. The piece originally garnered an NA, but I re-directed the poem + it received much appreciated recognition. Best regards, Brian
Date: 6/25/2021 1:14:00 PM
a fine piece of writing Brian, giving one some things to ponder indeed.
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Date: 6/25/2021 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon. Yes, our oceans are under siege on so many fronts. Be well. Brian
Date: 6/18/2021 11:10:00 AM
A wonderful water write. I love the water and the sand. I wonderful how much fun fish really do have. Have a blessed day/weekend.......................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/18/2021 12:10:00 PM
Thank you, Paula, for your stop by + kind remarks. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 6/18/2021 6:48:00 AM
Much to ponder, peace and loss suspended in salty tears. I do believe the oceans are collectively crying. We humans have done so much damage.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/18/2021 9:56:00 AM
Indeed, we have polluted our oceans. Thanks very much for your drop + comments Richard. Best wishes, Brian

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