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Waters

Waters rolling incessantly through mountainsides like morning dew, Storm winds taking over life's days; non realizing moments of dread as night-fall crept upon the horizon. One day at a time life continued it's course sunrise, once again came about; Yet, waters still rolled through the mountainsides.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/14/2015 8:23:00 AM
This was really nice to read, how waters still roll...Grats on this being featured on the homepage this week :)
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Tanya Campos-Gracia
Date: 10/4/2015 7:53:00 PM
Thank you so very much for having stopped by reading and commenting on my work, I truly appreciate it, Tanya
Date: 8/1/2015 8:57:00 PM
the maintainer of Life, running its course....the ultimate cleanser, it needs minimal force....the taste of purity, as God Intended....we all need it so none better be offended....lol....great write here....;)
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Tanya Campos-Gracia
Date: 10/4/2015 7:54:00 PM
I agree, thank you for reading, Tanya
Date: 7/30/2015 6:25:00 PM
And into the ocean of life, eh? This comes from first reading. Good stuff, Tanya. I like the use of waters to create mysticism, Love, daver
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Tanya Campos-Gracia
Date: 10/4/2015 7:54:00 PM
Thank you so very muc for reading and commening on my work... Tanya

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