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Watermelon

W-watery a-appertizing t-treat e-enjoyable r-red m-memorable e-eatable l-likeable o-on a hot day n-neutrision

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Date: 8/2/2017 9:54:00 AM
Very nice acrostic, Dar. I wish I had a piece right now.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/2/2017 1:32:00 PM
Do eat it or juice it? I would rather juice it than eat it. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/31/2017 1:14:00 PM
- On a hot day ... tasty and juicy, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2017 5:12:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile,I hope all is well with you.Yes tasty and juicy.Hot and humid here today. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/29/2017 12:22:00 AM
Hi Darlene. The selection of words is marvelous. Well done on this.
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Augustus Black
Date: 7/29/2017 12:28:00 PM
Hi Darlene. Drinking is a cool choice you made.For me I drank it already through this poem. All the best.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/29/2017 12:10:00 PM
Oh, hello Augustus hope you are having a nice day. I would rather drink it than eat it. How about you? Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/28/2017 5:13:00 PM
You're making me want to go buy one now. Lol! Awesomely done, Darlene :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2017 6:22:00 PM
You will enjoy it Akkina. Juicing it or eating it is still good. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/28/2017 2:36:00 PM
I think you described it very well...
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2017 6:21:00 PM
Thank you, I use to juice it every morning before breakfast. It tasted better juicing it than eating it. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/28/2017 2:29:00 PM
A sweet and satisfying poem, Darlene. I smiled so much on that line ... neutrision. That is one spacey watermelon from the lush planet of Zekar. Lovely write. Love and hugs always.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/2/2017 2:19:00 PM
I enjoy to drink it than eat it.You know I enjoy every poem that you write. Love and Hugs. My friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2017 6:31:00 PM
Thank you I prefer to drink it. it is filling so you don't eat as much. I found when I drank it. Have a nice day my friend. love and hugs my friend.
Date: 7/27/2017 3:31:00 PM
Awesome acrostic Darlene. I like watermelon. I must say, I now want some too :) Your poems are nice !
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2017 6:37:00 PM
Hello Heidi,thank you,I like to juice my watermelon instead of eating it.Ithank you. I also like your poetry.

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