Waterfall Wishes On Stars With No Swings Premiere Contest Winner

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Waterfall wishes on stars with no swings I’m sending to you on butterfly wings. Pennies are wasted on a wishing well. Pennies instead for sweet thoughts that you tell. Oh, pennies from heaven as your heart sings waterfall wishes on stars with no swings and dandelion dreams you hope will come true. I’ll click my red heels to bring them to you! Over my rainbow, love can stay blind. Better than Leprechaun’s gold, you will find waterfall wishes on stars with no swings and all of my love attached with no strings. Close your eyes; take my hand; let yourself feel. I’ll be your Wendy if you’ll make it real! Fly me away to a dreamland that brings waterfall wishes on stars with no swings. Written Dec. 17, 2016 For Julie Leigh Rodeheaver "Whisper Sweet Nothings" Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/28/2021 10:28:00 AM
Happy Sunday Andrea, 'Waterfall wishes on stars with no swings ~~ Pennies are wasted on a wishing well. ~~ Pennies instead for sweet thoughts that you tell.' A penny for your thoughts..takes me back. Though can't quite put my finger on it, this poem seemed to be written from a different Andrea. Except for all the comments. a veritable who's who of the Soup. That swing looks like pure fun., got a kick outta that. -Richard
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Date: 3/28/2021 2:08:00 PM
the title was given to all of us by the contest sponsor, so that part does not sound like me, I suppose. But the rest is me!! I love this poetry form. i found the sponsor's title perfect for the moving line of quatern.
Date: 2/27/2020 2:04:00 PM
Hello Andrea Dietrich, you created a beautiful poem. Have a nice day my friend. hugs /Darlene
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Date: 1/5/2019 7:39:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Date: 1/3/2019 11:49:00 AM
Waterfall wishes on stars with no swings--magic all the way through!!! Beautiful!!! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/2/2019 5:23:00 PM
Andrea, congrats on your first place win on mile 7 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest! Outstanding Quatern! You take me back to when I first saw Mary Martin as Peter Pan :) ~Mark
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Date: 1/2/2019 5:17:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! LOVELY Janice
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Date: 1/2/2019 5:15:00 PM
you are flying high my friend, dropping back again to give my congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/5/2018 7:04:00 AM
Such a lovely read! A fave! Congrats! I’m a big fan of that which makes us soar!
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Date: 9/4/2018 11:10:00 PM
I like this, congrats.
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Date: 9/4/2018 4:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Magical.
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Date: 9/2/2018 3:19:00 PM
This has a fairy-tale feeling, Andrea ! Congrats on your top spot in John's contest!
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Date: 9/1/2018 2:07:00 PM
Andrea, my wife read this over my shoulder and punched me saying...."THAT'S GOTTA BE A WINNER!" I think it was the "I'll be your Wendy if you'll make it real!" line that got her. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Date: 11/23/2017 2:21:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Andrea - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 11/19/2017 9:56:00 PM
What a magical poem. Well deserved win, Andrea!!
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Date: 11/19/2017 6:29:00 PM
I can't believe I've not commented on this little gem before! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/19/2017 2:00:00 PM
Hi Andrea: congratulations on a stellar win. I love the title of this poem but I love the poem even more. This is so beautiful worthy of a 1st place win.
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Date: 11/19/2017 12:01:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Andrea
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Date: 11/19/2017 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your first placement with this sweet love poem Andrea! : )
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Date: 11/19/2017 11:37:00 AM
This is beautiful - don't know that I'd read it before??? Anyway, it thrills me to share first place with your entry! Love it. Love you ... CayCay
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Date: 11/19/2017 10:36:00 AM
As always your adaptation to put any theme into any form of poetry and make it an amazing piece of art is above and beyond all the rest of us, congratulations
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Date: 11/19/2017 9:41:00 AM
Fantastic pen Andrea! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Date: 11/19/2017 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win. You never cease to amaze me.
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Date: 11/19/2017 9:03:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea, for this sweet beautiful love poem. Another oldie but goldie! John
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Date: 5/31/2017 9:37:00 AM
I found this while looking up this form! And I remember this awesome write! Once again, outstanding, Andrea!
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Date: 1/14/2017 11:49:00 PM
Great poetry Andrea, another home run !
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