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Waterfall Walk

A mile and a half on a trail in the mist With the bleating of sheep with black faces Was a nightcap so perfect I have to insist That it ranks with the most magic places. The path did meander on pebbles through trees As the sky kept the darkness from falling And when we reached the waterfall, how it did please That I'd answered the travel bug's calling, To lift yourself out of the daily routine For a journey with joys to uncover Is the very best cure for the doldrums I've seen And who knows what I next will discover?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/30/2017 9:32:00 AM
This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.
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Date: 6/28/2017 11:13:00 AM
What a magical experience...you are right my friend, get up out of that recliner and go explore, you never know what you might discover.
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Date: 6/28/2017 9:40:00 AM
Sounds like you are having fun, Mrs Ilene:)
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Date: 6/28/2017 6:09:00 AM
The only thing that would have made this rhyming poem better is if you'd taken me with you. You're a great travel guide and a wonderful poetess.
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Date: 6/28/2017 5:54:00 AM
Beautiful...Nothing like nature to put one's spirit in a happy place. Hugs, dear
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Date: 6/28/2017 5:01:00 AM
Another beautifully flowing poem and I hope you are having a wonderful holiday Ilene. I am sure we will hear more of your travel tales in the next few days:-) hugs Jan xx
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