Ilene Bauer Poet Rhyme

Waterfall Walk

A mile and a half on a trail in the mist
With the bleating of sheep with black faces
Was a nightcap so perfect I have to insist
That it ranks with the most magic places.

The path did meander on pebbles through trees
As the sky kept the darkness from falling
And when we reached the waterfall, how it did please
That I'd answered the travel bug's calling,

To lift yourself out of the daily routine
For a journey with joys to uncover
Is the very best cure for the doldrums I've seen
And who knows what I next will discover?

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Funom Makama June 30, 2017 at 9:32 AM This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.

Chris Green June 28, 2017 at 11:13 AM What a magical experience...you are right my friend, get up out of that recliner and go explore, you never know what you might discover.

Daniel Turner June 28, 2017 at 9:40 AM Sounds like you are having fun, Mrs Ilene:)

Lin Lane June 28, 2017 at 6:09 AM The only thing that would have made this rhyming poem better is if you'd taken me with you. You're a great travel guide and a wonderful poetess.

Eileen Manassian June 28, 2017 at 5:54 AM Beautiful...Nothing like nature to put one's spirit in a happy place. Hugs, dear

Jan Allison June 28, 2017 at 5:01 AM Another beautifully flowing poem and I hope you are having a wonderful holiday Ilene. I am sure we will hear more of your travel tales in the next few days:-) hugs Jan xx