Sara Kendrick Poet Rengay

Waterfall Trickles

waterfall trickles
thawing ice releases drops...
moss 'pon rocks turns green

The frozen giant tower
Great mighty melting water

waterfall's moisture
seeps as spring awakes nature..
deer sups deep from stream

rain from mountain top
turns to mist as it comes down..
rainbow in my eyes 

The bridal veil waterfall
Seen through Azaleas' blossoms

early morning scents
come blooming into my life..
melting waterfall 

Rengay collaboration between myself and Russell Sivey..

We have been working on this for a few days now..

I wrote first, third, and fifth
Russell wrote second, fourth, and sixth

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Jack Horne August 2, 2013 at 1:22 AM you two did a really great job here, Sara : )

Mustapha Mohammed August 1, 2013 at 2:16 PM Nice job from the both of you.I enjoyed perusing this collaboration on this sultry evening.

Robert Pettit August 1, 2013 at 10:00 AM A very good collaboration.

Kim Van Breda August 1, 2013 at 6:57 AM Great write from both of your talented pens. I loved the 'flow' and feel of this.

Poet. Undertaker August 1, 2013 at 6:28 AM a great task. awesome poem.great! (:c Jenish

Anne Rutherford July 31, 2013 at 5:11 PM WOW, what a great poem!!!! You both did an outstanding job. Reads like a keeper . (Will outlast us.) XXOO Anne.

Suzanne Delaney July 31, 2013 at 3:12 PM So harmonious between you and Russell. You make beautiful imagery, together. SuZ

Nette Onclaud July 31, 2013 at 10:56 AM great tandem, sara.. you combined art wonderfully portrays the beauty of nature through in this lovely piece..applause!..:) hugggs