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Waterfall Trickles

waterfall trickles thawing ice releases drops... moss 'pon rocks turns green The frozen giant tower Great mighty melting water waterfall's moisture seeps as spring awakes nature.. deer sups deep from stream rain from mountain top turns to mist as it comes down.. rainbow in my eyes The bridal veil waterfall Seen through Azaleas' blossoms early morning scents come blooming into my life.. melting waterfall
Rengay collaboration between myself and Russell Sivey.. We have been working on this for a few days now.. I wrote first, third, and fifth Russell wrote second, fourth, and sixth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/2/2013 1:22:00 AM
you two did a really great job here, Sara : )
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Date: 8/1/2013 2:16:00 PM
Nice job from the both of you.I enjoyed perusing this collaboration on this sultry evening.
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Date: 8/1/2013 10:00:00 AM
A very good collaboration.
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Date: 8/1/2013 6:57:00 AM
Great write from both of your talented pens. I loved the 'flow' and feel of this.
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Date: 8/1/2013 6:28:00 AM
a great task. awesome poem.great! (:c Jenish
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Date: 7/31/2013 5:11:00 PM
WOW, what a great poem!!!! You both did an outstanding job. Reads like a keeper . (Will outlast us.) XXOO Anne.
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Date: 7/31/2013 3:12:00 PM
So harmonious between you and Russell. You make beautiful imagery, together. SuZ
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Date: 7/31/2013 10:56:00 AM
great tandem, sara.. you combined art wonderfully portrays the beauty of nature through in this lovely piece..applause!..:) hugggs
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