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Waterfall of Wonderfulness

Believe me...buddy: I've been through my ups and downs! Stay strong, child of His! I feel so sublime Like a verse with cheery rhyme Yes – wonderful time! I let out laughter I squeal with childlike joy…and A waterfall? Oh boy… I chillax and breathe In and out…calming my nerves I’m a fearless man! Thrilled, but terrified You’re fine – all I have to do Is go with the flow! I drift on calmly Fate’s drawing near, don’t worry! Accept the challenge! Ch-chilled to the bone I’m about to lose control I need self-control! Relax, boy! Kick back Come on, man! Break a leg – hah! I can face my fears . . . I am colliding I’m letting go of my boat Ooh, I am gliding! I feel superb vibes, Crawlin’ up and down my spine Wonderful feeling! Listen up...buddy! My heart has been pumped with glee You heard my heartbeats?

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Date: 7/13/2014 8:16:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/13/2014 4:29:00 PM
YAY! Guess what? I earned 150 views on this poem! I am so proud of myself for trying out on that contest. Thank you all for commenting - tell everyone you know about this poem/verse! Have a sun-shining summer, dear poets and poetesses. (x -DWB
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Date: 7/13/2014 11:51:00 AM
Wonderful Second place my friend Happy Hugs !!
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Date: 7/13/2014 8:30:00 AM
congrats David, on fine win. Mohan
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Date: 7/12/2014 10:42:00 AM
Beautiful, David. Metaphor for life. Reminds me of the white water rafting here in West Virginia.
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Date: 7/12/2014 4:46:00 AM
Tremendous write David! Congrats on huge merited win!
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Date: 7/11/2014 9:16:00 PM
Beautiful piece of work Congrats! Kim
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Date: 6/7/2014 11:19:00 AM
Here i am lol......This poem is great i love it to death bro :)-Love Ettie
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