Waterfall of Wonderfulness

Believe me...buddy: 
I've been through my ups and downs!
Stay strong, child of His!

I feel so sublime
Like a verse with cheery rhyme 
Yes – wonderful time!

I let out laughter
I squeal with childlike joy…and
A waterfall? Oh boy…

I chillax and breathe
In and out…calming my nerves
I’m a fearless man!

Thrilled, but terrified
You’re fine – all I have to do
Is go with the flow!

I drift on calmly
Fate’s drawing near, don’t worry!
Accept the challenge!

Ch-chilled to the bone
I’m about to lose control
I need self-control!

Relax, boy! Kick back 
Come on, man! Break a leg – hah! 
I can face my fears . . . 

I am colliding 
I’m letting go of my boat
Ooh, I am gliding!

I feel superb vibes, 
Crawlin’ up and down my spine
Wonderful feeling!

Listen up...buddy!
My heart has been pumped with glee
You heard my heartbeats?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guzzi Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 8:16 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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July 13, 2014 at 4:29 PM
YAY! Guess what? I earned 150 views on this poem! I am so proud of myself for trying out on that contest. Thank you all for commenting - tell everyone you know about this poem/verse! Have a sun-shining summer, dear poets and poetesses. (x -DWB
Nance Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Wonderful Second place my friend Happy Hugs !!
Chutani Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 8:30 AM
congrats David, on fine win. Mohan
Gibson Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 10:42 AM
Beautiful, David. Metaphor for life. Reminds me of the white water rafting here in West Virginia.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 4:46 AM
Tremendous write David! Congrats on huge merited win!
Morrison Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Beautiful piece of work Congrats! Kim
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June 7, 2014 at 11:19 AM
Here i am lol......This poem is great i love it to death bro :)-Love Ettie
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