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Waterdroplets Gives Life

Now lies the waterdroplet on the edge Excess moisture wrung from the foggy air Droplets that are somehow a reserve hedge Drops that all the insects, birds, lizzards share French Tarragon pointed leaves perfect shape For water to collect travel down tip Hang suspended surrounded by cloudscape Time seems to stand still few hours 'till slip Gone with the heat of the appearing sun There for just short time so that all can drink The sun has done a good job and you spun Dry as in a modern dryer in a wink To all things there is a season but some short Can some be extended _ not early thwart

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/29/2010 2:10:00 AM

great peace here my friend thank you duncan

Susan Palli

Date: 9/29/2010 11:24:00 AM

Great imagery and expression!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/29/2010 11:04:00 AM

I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Sara. Keeping you and yours in my prayers dear friend. Love, Carol

Elton Pearson

Date: 9/29/2010 10:45:00 AM

great poem enjoyed reading this soo much love elton x

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/29/2010 9:19:00 AM

A wonderful sonnet Sara. Water is the droplet of life and nourishment. Enjoyed the read. God Bless Phyl

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/29/2010 6:48:00 AM

This is a beautiful sonnet you got here Sara. Sometimes we forget the nourishment that comes with those droplets.. love Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/29/2010 6:11:00 AM

Wellm penned sonnet on Waterdroplets, Sara. enjoiyed it,

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/28/2010 7:02:00 PM

Ahh David said it so well....cool mezmerizing meditation on natural phenomenon...right there looking at it with you. Enjoyed this, Sara.

David Smalling

Date: 9/28/2010 5:58:00 PM

Another display of the keen observation you bring to nature ... and familiarity with which your poems treat it. Abundant blessings, my friends

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2010 4:56:00 PM

sara, you did really well with your sonnet here. A great topic! For sure, some things are "short" for us! enjoyed the nature description. LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/28/2010 4:55:00 PM

enjoyed reading your good penned poems today! Hope you are feeling better!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/28/2010 4:21:00 PM

It's been raining all day, so nature has been nourished. But most of the time, it's just as you say: the sun appears and dries up the lifegiving moisture that forms overnight. Stunning sonnet, Sara! Love, Carolyn

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/28/2010 3:55:00 PM

In those early morning hours, the birds and plants have to make the most of the moisture that forms, Sara. As you say so eloquently, the sunlight quickly dries the morning dew. A beautiful sonnet about nature. Best to you, Diane

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/28/2010 3:17:00 PM

Such a beautiful piece of poetry Sara.. luv Sonnets when other poets write them.. I am not skilled in this form myself..but luv this one.. my friend.. hope all is well.. we are all well and settled again.. for now..

Simone Segal

Date: 9/28/2010 3:15:00 PM

Hello Sara, Lovely poem, thank you for your comment, yes the world, you and i, are made of 70% to 90% water. Water shapes to beautiful crystals on beautiful thoughts and things, what we are thinking is shaping ourselves and the world! When i drink or bath in water i think love, gratitude, health, youth!!!LOL. I have lost 5 stone in weight and shaping my life to follow my dreams! Thank you, Love Simone

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/28/2010 2:39:00 PM

Another stunning write, you always leave me waiting for the next gem....wonderful write my dear..love Michael