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Watercolour Painted Skies

Watercolour painted skies of ochre tinged with grey; early sunset settles on a dying autumn day. Ancient oaks resplendently release their rain of gold, crisp leaves catch the breeze to whisper secrets yet untold. A richly coloured tapestry breathes fragrant melodies, suffusing notes of amber with the scent of cedar trees; distant joyful echoes as young laughter leaves the park, heeding grown up warnings to be home before the dark. The last remaining sunlight lies in ripples on the lake, slowly yielding to the surface, leaving naught for eve to take.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/26/2010 5:20:00 AM
SHARON , I LOVE TO DRAW AND PAINT , AND THIS POEM IS GREAT ! LIKE A PAINTING ITSELF ! Best wishes , - Raj
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Date: 7/4/2010 6:21:00 AM
Sharon, That was really nice. I could see the colors and hear the laughter.
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Date: 6/22/2010 8:47:00 AM
Enjoyable read. Very descriptive.
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Date: 6/16/2010 6:49:00 AM
Hi Sharon :) This reads like a dream & a painting (I think all your poems are ^_~) & I have to say that I can so relate with Andrea--heehee how many times have I said that your poems make me want to sigh?? ;) btw, thanks for your wonderful comments, maybe I'll try posting more of my poems but yikes I think some of them speak of angst too much ;) hopefully that shooting star of yours can become that other kind though...:) --nikko :)
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Date: 6/15/2010 11:27:00 AM
Your words paint a most lovely picture of Autumn Sharon. More delightful poetry from your inner portfolio >> James
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Date: 6/15/2010 5:01:00 AM
What a lovely image of sunset, Sharon! Can smell the nscent of cedar trees!!! Every single line is just beatifully written. Thank you for your kind comments and have a great day....Gert
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Date: 6/14/2010 9:03:00 PM
Your poems nearly make me sigh. WONDERFUL!! EVery line paints a picture!
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Date: 6/14/2010 4:24:00 PM
Very descriptive write with excellent metaphoric language..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:42:00 PM
Beautiful poem and beautifully written. I enjoyed it! Caryl
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:08:00 PM
WOW...Great Imagery....Great Write Sharon....Larry
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