Watercolors Wet

The artist sighs with deep regret,
too late to stop, the colors wet,
greens and blues and purples met,
pollute and blur his raw sunset.

A baby stirs, begins to fret,
an athlete pauses, drenched in sweat,
daily building karmic debt,
turn up the volume on the set.

Darkness spawns a silhouette,
war-torn bloodless bayonet,
too drunk to say the alphabet,
life and death sing their duet.

The engine roars in the Corvette,
haven't hit 190 yet,
the car leaps forward like a jet,
dear God, I want a cigarette.


©Danielle White
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 3/5/2010 10:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura :)
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Date: 3/5/2010 1:44:00 PM
Hey Daniell, my congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 3/5/2010 12:28:00 PM
So very true what a strange sense of karma hey? Lovely write, well done! All the best... Anna-Marie.
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Date: 3/5/2010 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on having this awesome poem featured. I love the last stanza
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Date: 3/5/2010 5:53:00 AM
Such interesting snippets of time...harsh yet bright...reminds me of James Dean. Hope you and yours are feeling well and happy. Light & Love
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Date: 3/3/2010 11:59:00 PM
Congrats my friend. Post some more. Ernilando
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Date: 3/2/2010 6:26:00 PM
Danielle, Congratulations on having this wonderful poem featured. Excellent writing! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:18:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen....What would it be like to go 190mph and not be airborne. Congratulations of your poem being featured this week. Sara
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Date: 2/28/2010 8:50:00 PM
Congrats Danielle on your featured poem and win in the Poetry Soup Contest.. on Soup.. wonderful win for a wonderful poetess..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/28/2009 4:10:00 PM
Dear Danielle, Second of two Congratulations on getting through the First Round of the PoetrySoup October contest Wishing YOU the best of Luck ALWAYS…HG
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Date: 12/25/2009 5:27:00 AM
creative, original and a deserving finalist! jimbo
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:59:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:22:00 PM
You are one of my favorite poets, Danielle. Congratulations on having two poems make it to the next round. I pray for you each day and hope the new year brings you good news. Much Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:10:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 6/12/2009 10:26:00 AM
The artist Danielle and her easel of words, written to be read, one day will be heard>James
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Date: 5/2/2009 12:13:00 AM
Wow stylish stanzas! Full of life and rhyme great write! - darkpoet
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