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Water Wonders Collection

crystals cascading springing from hilly fortress~ brighten up home lamps stream ripples with life nourishing aquatic wealth~ enriches green fields welcoming waves glow offer refreshing respite~ midst sunbathing bliss beside still waters* the Lord leads me as His sheep~ fellowship triumph Psalm 23:1-2*The LORD is my shepherd; I shall not want...He leadeth me beside the still waters. 4th stanza was added on October 9, 2022, after judging result was posted. September 30, 2022 4th place, "A Haiku Collection of Three - Nature Themed" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 10/9/2022

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Len Gasun

Date: 10/10/2022 4:29:00 PM

Very beautiful and inspiring chain of haiku my dear friend Beata. Hugging this precious gem and you. I always Thank God for His loving words through your wonderful poetry. Congratulations on your win! God bless you always. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2022 11:04:00 AM

~ Congratulations on your winning poem ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2022 3:49:00 AM

Creative way to go with this faith-based work. I think you could swap 3 and 4 putting 4 first then 3. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing this winner. Congratulations. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2022 8:28:00 AM

I think the only problem is you did 4 instead of 3. Glad to see this one on the winner list, Beata. Congratulations.

Beata Agustin
Date: 10/9/2022 8:10:00 PM

Thanks... Actually, I added the fourth "stanza" after the judging was posted. It is to testify about the still waters where the Lord as my shepherd leads me. God bless you.