Beata Agustin Poet Haiku

Water Wonders Collection

crystals cascading
springing from hilly fortress~
brighten up home lamps

stream ripples with life
nourishing aquatic wealth~
enriches green fields

welcoming waves glow
offer refreshing respite~
midst sunbathing bliss

beside still waters*
the Lord leads me as His sheep~
fellowship triumph 

Psalm 23:1-2*The LORD is my shepherd; I shall not want...He leadeth me beside the still waters.
4th stanza was added on October 9, 2022, after judging result was posted.

September 30, 2022
4th place, "A Haiku Collection of Three - Nature Themed" Poetry Writing Contest	Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 10/9/2022

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Len Gasun October 10, 2022 at 4:29 PM Very beautiful and inspiring chain of haiku my dear friend Beata. Hugging this precious gem and you. I always Thank God for His loving words through your wonderful poetry. Congratulations on your win! God bless you always. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen October 10, 2022 at 11:04 AM ~ Congratulations on your winning poem ~

Sara Kendrick October 10, 2022 at 3:49 AM Creative way to go with this faith-based work. I think you could swap 3 and 4 putting 4 first then 3. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing this winner. Congratulations. Sara

Andrea Dietrich October 9, 2022 at 8:28 AM I think the only problem is you did 4 instead of 3. Glad to see this one on the winner list, Beata. Congratulations. Beata Agustin October 9, 2022 at 8:10 PM Thanks... Actually, I added the fourth "stanza" after the judging was posted. It is to testify about the still waters where the Lord as my shepherd leads me. God bless you.

Heidi Sands October 9, 2022 at 5:51 AM Congratulations for this beautiful win :)

Tania Kitchin October 9, 2022 at 5:44 AM Beata, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely poems!

Linda Alice Fowler October 2, 2022 at 6:45 AM Soft and flowing Beata. So very nice :) Linda

Chris Conn October 1, 2022 at 11:55 PM Good luck!

Steven Keller October 1, 2022 at 6:16 AM Thanks for highlighting the beauty and value of water. This is refreshing.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2022 at 2:04 AM - Lovely haikus, Beata - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs