Water Phantom

Under a spray of cold water Sizzles upon impact on my passionate body Droplets of desire trickling down You are the water phantom Flame and water ignites a spark Building intense harmony through silent chaos Desire burning inside Sensations brewing in hot lava Your love letters licking my mind Every alphabet is a glinting beacon in my unlit chamber You are the conductor of my orchestra making melodies Together we make beautiful rhythms in giving and taking
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 9, 2016 at 3:53 AM
I love the sizzling burning water fire love analogy very much.
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September 4, 2016 at 10:28 AM
Hello Angeline!! I certainly agree with what T.J. mentions in his response to your very radiant write here. The passion and intensity of "Water Phantom" are clearly on display for the reader to absorb from this wonderful and sensual free verse write. Excellent Work!! SEVEN/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary (P.S. I really like the touch and feel of this poem. Keep Spilling Ink!! -- GB)
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September 12, 2016 at 8:30 PM
Thank you kindly
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