Water Lily

WATER LILY

reflections..... 

           unfolding  from 
   
                    your silken-white hands

send mirrors            of yellow peace

           gently nourishing those who seek

                                healing         upon arrival

                                                         at your 
            
                                                                 shores

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/4/2009 12:15:00 PM
wonderful imagery James! Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Krista
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Date: 8/19/2009 11:33:00 AM
hA! i thought so! congrats! :D
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Date: 8/18/2009 8:40:00 AM
Wow what a beauty this is! Warmest congrats on your well deserved First Place win in Brian's contest! love, shar xoxo
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Date: 8/18/2009 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's Bloom contest Jim. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/18/2009 1:27:00 AM
Congratulations on winning Brian's contest, Bloom. Beautiful poetry. God Bless. Leon
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Date: 8/17/2009 8:05:00 PM
Incredibly beautiful James..Wow, what a well deserved win. Barbara
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Date: 8/17/2009 10:24:00 AM
I don't know how I missed this absolutely beautiful entry, James.....it is breath-taking, and for sure, it is deserving this winning 1st place!! Kuddos....it is the most lovely poem!:) Love, Carrie
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Date: 8/17/2009 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations Jim - It's a beautiful piece.
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Date: 8/17/2009 8:44:00 AM
Congrats on your succes in my Bloom contest Jim.Rgds Brian .My latest contest is now open I will mail your prize to my file address later this week unless you advise otherwise
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Date: 8/16/2009 11:16:00 PM
beautiful lily--and so the creation here,i love your style--charma
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Date: 8/13/2009 12:42:00 PM
James M. Goff, You have chosen a beautiful favorite flower. And I do believe that Monet would enjoy reading your delightful words were he still here. (Maybe he's looking over my shoulder from the spirit world!!! ) Good luck in Brian's contest. Always, DAS-J
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Date: 8/10/2009 5:13:00 AM
Good luck in the contest James, this is lovely!
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Date: 8/9/2009 2:19:00 PM
once again a great job by a great poet !! :)
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Date: 8/9/2009 9:50:00 AM
Jim it is Sunday afternoon here and I am happy to share this time reading your fantastic poetry. Good luck in the contest my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2009 2:19:00 AM
Gorgeous imagery Jim. Good luck on the contest. Sounds like a winner to me :-)
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Date: 8/9/2009 12:45:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Jim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/8/2009 5:14:00 PM
Beautifully written. Sara
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Date: 8/8/2009 2:25:00 PM
You are so creative..I love this piece and its format. There goes any chance I ever had...smile. BG
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Date: 8/8/2009 1:39:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, James! I never thought of the water lilies as "silken-white hands" before, and I love the way you allow them to nourish those who find these floating treasures. (Still in the process of moving, but was suffering Soup withdrawal so I had to visit.) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2009 1:34:00 PM
This is beautiful brother Jimbo..I love the calmness to this piece..felt like I was looking at painting of words..good work and best wishes.
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Date: 8/8/2009 1:10:00 PM
no wonder I never have a chance of winning these contest! so many good poets and your on the top my friend! Great poem indeed
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