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Water Hibernation

Placid and frigid
Clad shrouded stones of splendor
In a winter bath

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 7, 2010 at 12:15 PM

Congratulations Laura, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann (Please call me I lost your number)

Andrea Dietrich

March 4, 2010 at 1:53 PM

Great job in the contest and congratulations, Laura!

John Freeman

March 4, 2010 at 10:06 AM

A nice honor mentioned Laura. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Marty Owens

March 4, 2010 at 7:48 AM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

March 3, 2010 at 9:52 PM

So very nice Haiku! Laura! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Iolanda Scripca

March 3, 2010 at 7:56 PM

Placid and frigid - I like the two words put together in the beginning of your Haiku. Cool. :) Thanks for your comment too. Love, Iolanda

Robert A. Dufresne

March 3, 2010 at 5:31 PM

love the way this Haiku rolls off the tongue, Laura. congrats on your placement in this contest!

Connie Marcum Wong

March 3, 2010 at 12:38 PM

Laura, Wow, I would have graded your outstanding haiku at the top, especially with your last line. Congratulations in being in the winner's circle. Blessings, Connie

James Fraser

March 3, 2010 at 11:36 AM

Laura, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

Sara Kendrick

March 3, 2010 at 10:27 AM

Great winter Haiku. I can feel the shivers. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Joyce Johnson

March 3, 2010 at 9:02 AM

Really pretty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 3, 2010 at 5:55 AM

Congrats Laura on your HM in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for a beautiful Haiku for a lovely poetess.. enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 3, 2010 at 3:33 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Laura. Love,Carol

Raul Moreno

March 3, 2010 at 1:48 AM

Laura, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

February 28, 2010 at 10:55 AM

Not sure I want that bath--especially if it was in North Dakota right now. Nice use of alliteration in the second line. If this is a contest entry, best wishes with it. Keep on writing! Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 28, 2010 at 6:32 AM

This one is good! Is it for Raul's contest? Some people, like you, can come up with some beautiful words to describe beautiful images. Nice! Good luck in the contest. Smiles, Dane Ann (soup mail)

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 25, 2010 at 9:50 AM

I wish you the best in Raul's contest Laura. Have a wonderful day my friend. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

February 24, 2010 at 7:25 PM

Laura, I hope you place high with this little beauty!! LUv, andrea

Carrie Richards

February 24, 2010 at 5:55 PM

Oh I love that last line especially!! Nicely done, Laura!! Love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 24, 2010 at 4:26 PM

Luv this one Laura.. if your entry for the new contest.. good luck... a great descriptive Haiku ..vivid and visual.. I posted a blog on poetry today if u care to comment.. thankxxx...luv..Linda-Marie..