Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Rhyme

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Water Fingers Caress

WATER FINGERS CARESS


Crystal water fingers caress 
stony marsh-grassy lands
its waves cajoles leaving fine pearls
of sea gifts: the bed sands

Above... still azure clouds look out,
running waves draw and probe
shoreless gleam of reeds or fields
ebbing on earthly globe...
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Sponsor: Nette Onclaud 
Contest Name: LET ME FEEL YOUR LINES! 
...Shoreline...

O.E. Guillermo
10:44 pm, March 31, 2015

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Sara Kendrick May 18, 2015 at 12:17 PM Ahhh! I like the descriptiveness of this winner..Way to go...Congrats..Sara

Noel Villarosa May 17, 2015 at 1:22 AM Impressive write, Olive. Inspiring affection with the panoramic views of the ocean and shoreline. Congratulations, kabayan. (^_^) Noel. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 9:24 AM thank you so much Noel.. =')!

Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2015 at 12:14 AM Lovely images as ever, Olive. Congrats on your fine win.

Paul Callus May 15, 2015 at 1:28 PM So pleased to be back with Congratulations , Olive_eloi!! Looked like a winner from the start! hugs // paul

Kp Nunez May 15, 2015 at 4:42 AM Simply beautiful, Olive. Congratulations! Kim

Barbara Gorelick May 14, 2015 at 9:02 PM Congrats to you! BG

Poet Destroyer A May 14, 2015 at 7:41 PM Olive :-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~

Jan Allison May 14, 2015 at 6:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A May 14, 2015 at 5:22 PM Olive, congratulations on your win. SKAT Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 9:03 AM thanks much Skat! ;)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 2, 2015 at 2:37 PM Your words create a magical scene, Olive, better than the picture. Happy Easter...hugs, Rhonda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 3, 2015 at 9:52 AM "Your words create a magical scene, Olive, better than the picture. Happy Easter...hugs, Rhonda"

Maurice Yvonne April 2, 2015 at 2:32 PM Words that magnify the picture above. A real treat to read. Lots Of Love Armand. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 3, 2015 at 9:52 AM "Words that magnify the picture above. A real treat to read. Lots Of Love Armand."

James Fraser April 2, 2015 at 1:02 PM Your words are like a path on the coast. I'd love to walk this path with you and live your words Oliz. Good luck in the contest with this little gem, hugs//xx//DinoJames xx James Fraser April 3, 2015 at 1:26 PM Oliz, my support for you will only grow and grow, as you know, hugs//xx//DinoJamesxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 3, 2015 at 9:53 AM Dino James, Your words are rich in support and encouragement.. :) Thanks much.. I hope it will please the sponsor though.. :)!

Emile Pinet April 2, 2015 at 10:49 AM An outpouring of thoughts that surge up from the heart and splash against the page in quiet beauty. Emile. #7 Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 3, 2015 at 9:37 AM thanks much Emile.. :)! i appreciate your drop by.. :)!

Paul Callus April 2, 2015 at 6:40 AM Hi Olive-eloi!:) I can feel your lines, and the water fingers' caress. Lovely and descriptive entry that ought to please the sponsor:) Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 3, 2015 at 9:27 AM Thank you Paul. O always welcome your drop by's.. :) hugs and hugs

Jan Allison March 31, 2015 at 5:54 PM I adore everything about this Olive the title is so so sensual and the poem a delight to read - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 3, 2015 at 9:24 AM thanks so much Jan for your lovely comments as always.. :)! hugs back.. :)!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 31, 2015 at 2:43 PM - Beautiful as always, dear friend Olive - Good luck in the contest! - I wish you a happy Easter :) - hugs from the yellow chicken :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 1, 2015 at 4:52 AM Thanks much Dear friend Anne Lise.. :) weeeee.. :) I wish you too a happy blessed Easter.. :)!