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WATER FINGERS CARESS Crystal water fingers caress stony marsh-grassy lands its waves cajoles leaving fine pearls of sea gifts: the bed sands Above... still azure clouds look out, running waves draw and probe shoreless gleam of reeds or fields ebbing on earthly globe... ___________________________________ Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest Name: LET ME FEEL YOUR LINES! ...Shoreline... O.E. Guillermo 10:44 pm, March 31, 2015

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2015 12:17:00 PM

Ahhh! I like the descriptiveness of this winner..Way to go...Congrats..Sara

Noel Villarosa

Date: 5/17/2015 1:22:00 AM

Impressive write, Olive. Inspiring affection with the panoramic views of the ocean and shoreline. Congratulations, kabayan. (^_^) Noel.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/5/2015 9:24:00 AM

thank you so much Noel.. =')!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2015 12:14:00 AM

Lovely images as ever, Olive. Congrats on your fine win.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/15/2015 1:28:00 PM

So pleased to be back with Congratulations , Olive_eloi!! Looked like a winner from the start! hugs // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/15/2015 4:42:00 AM

Simply beautiful, Olive. Congratulations! Kim

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/14/2015 9:02:00 PM

Congrats to you! BG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2015 7:41:00 PM

Olive :-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~

Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2015 6:00:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 5/14/2015 5:22:00 PM

Olive, congratulations on your win. SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/5/2015 9:03:00 AM

thanks much Skat! ;)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/2/2015 2:37:00 PM

Your words create a magical scene, Olive, better than the picture. Happy Easter...hugs, Rhonda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/3/2015 9:52:00 AM

"Your words create a magical scene, Olive, better than the picture. Happy Easter...hugs, Rhonda"

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/2/2015 2:32:00 PM

Words that magnify the picture above. A real treat to read. Lots Of Love Armand.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/3/2015 9:52:00 AM

"Words that magnify the picture above. A real treat to read. Lots Of Love Armand."

James Fraser

Date: 4/2/2015 1:02:00 PM

Your words are like a path on the coast. I'd love to walk this path with you and live your words Oliz. Good luck in the contest with this little gem, hugs//xx//DinoJames xx

James Fraser
Date: 4/3/2015 1:26:00 PM

Oliz, my support for you will only grow and grow, as you know, hugs//xx//DinoJamesxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/3/2015 9:53:00 AM

Dino James, Your words are rich in support and encouragement.. :) Thanks much.. I hope it will please the sponsor though.. :)!

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/2/2015 10:49:00 AM

An outpouring of thoughts that surge up from the heart and splash against the page in quiet beauty. Emile. #7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/3/2015 9:37:00 AM

thanks much Emile.. :)! i appreciate your drop by.. :)!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/2/2015 6:40:00 AM

Hi Olive-eloi!:) I can feel your lines, and the water fingers' caress. Lovely and descriptive entry that ought to please the sponsor:) Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/3/2015 9:27:00 AM

Thank you Paul. O always welcome your drop by's.. :) hugs and hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2015 5:54:00 PM

I adore everything about this Olive the title is so so sensual and the poem a delight to read - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/3/2015 9:24:00 AM

thanks so much Jan for your lovely comments as always.. :)! hugs back.. :)!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/31/2015 2:43:00 PM

- Beautiful as always, dear friend Olive - Good luck in the contest! - I wish you a happy Easter :) - hugs from the yellow chicken :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/1/2015 4:52:00 AM

Thanks much Dear friend Anne Lise.. :) weeeee.. :) I wish you too a happy blessed Easter.. :)!