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Water Falls In Love

Wild and free,... pounds a torrent of water. Turbulence hurtling hard, flows down the cliff, a jagged rock journey... to a tranquil river. Slow soft foams... kayak a serene river, of cool,.. calm,.. crystal clear water. Gentle splashing sound, loudly hugs the cliff. Dashing in roars,.. slips off bouldered cliff, Ebbing away ego,.. plunging the heart of river. In placid harmony of peace, glistens crashing water. Water falls?.cascading cliffs,.,perhaps falling in love with river? 22nd February 2019 A Tritina for Messina Contest Sponsor Charles Messina

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Date: 3/1/2019 11:46:00 AM
Delightful, Debjani. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/25/2019 5:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Debjani. Well done.
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Date: 2/24/2019 4:31:00 PM
Congratulations, Debjani! The images are fantastic!
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Date: 2/24/2019 4:08:00 PM
Beautifully written many congrats on your win Debjani:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/24/2019 3:40:00 PM
I love the flow of this. Great poem Debjani. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Charlie
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Date: 2/24/2019 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 2/24/2019 9:25:00 AM
Debjani, fantastic well written poem , great imagery , flow , and feeling.Congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/21/2019 3:40:00 PM
Wow! Well written. This is great :)
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