Water Falls In Love

Wild and free,... pounds a torrent of water.
Turbulence hurtling hard, flows down the  cliff, 
a jagged rock journey... to a tranquil river. 

Slow soft foams... kayak a serene river,
of cool,.. calm,.. crystal clear water.
Gentle splashing sound, loudly hugs the cliff.

Dashing in roars,.. slips off bouldered cliff,
Ebbing away ego,.. plunging the heart of river.
In placid harmony of peace, glistens crashing water.

Water falls?.cascading cliffs,.,perhaps falling in love with river?




22nd February 2019
A Tritina for Messina Contest
Sponsor Charles Messina
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Gauthier Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Delightful, Debjani. Congrats on your win.
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February 25, 2019 at 5:27 PM
Congrats on your win, Debjani. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 4:31 PM
Congratulations, Debjani! The images are fantastic!
Allison Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 4:08 PM
Beautifully written many congrats on your win Debjani:-) hugs Jan xx
Messina Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 3:40 PM
I love the flow of this. Great poem Debjani. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Charlie
Sands Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 1:26 PM
Congratulations for your win :)
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 9:25 AM
Debjani, fantastic well written poem , great imagery , flow , and feeling.Congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Sands Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 3:40 PM
Wow! Well written. This is great :)
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