Water Colour

streaks as autumn bleeds
the leaves painted on sidewalks~
abstract underfoot 


11/9/2020


5/7/5 how many syllables.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Lawrence Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 2:14 PM
You're still my favorite. Thank you, for your marvelous words and imagination. Kev
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 6:48 AM
I can’t thank you enough Kevin, that means the world to me. I forgot I could write like this. xomo
Lawrence Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 2:11 PM
You're still my favorite. Thank you.??
Zahid Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 7:56 AM
Great Imagery! Congrats on your win
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 7:24 AM
Thank you Paghunda! xomo
Koplin Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 8:06 AM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful
Allison Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 7:26 AM
I missed this gem before Mo, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 3:43 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful haiku, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 1:36 PM
Maureen, congratulations on your silver placement with your beautiful haiku!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 6:05 AM
Great imagery, Maureen. xovb ~~
Leiser Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 2:58 PM
You are the master of short poetry, Maureen! This beauty is perfect...great imagery! :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 7:55 AM
The leaves are falling, falling, falling. Most here are just parchment brown this year. Your work is so colorful. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Connelly Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 7:59 PM
Ah you've captured what is so true. An impressionist would embrace these bleeding words Maureen. Kudos!!!
Faulkner Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 7:41 PM
There are a bunch of leaves on my front lawn I have to rake, this makes me think of it, so evocative of the melancholy beauty of autumn!
One Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 2:01 PM
Lovely imagery
Woodrow Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 11:21 AM
so lovely said as always - short and perfect :)
Leffanta Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 10:40 AM
If you haven't applied for Alex Trebek's job, please do so today! It requires a Canadian with a quick wit, so you fit perfectly! Aloha! Rico
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