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streaks as autumn bleeds the leaves painted on sidewalks~ abstract underfoot 11/9/2020 5/7/5 how many syllables.

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Date: 3/16/2023 2:14:00 PM
You're still my favorite. Thank you, for your marvelous words and imagination. Kev
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/17/2023 6:48:00 AM
I can’t thank you enough Kevin, that means the world to me. I forgot I could write like this. xomo
Date: 3/16/2023 2:11:00 PM
You're still my favorite. Thank you.??
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Date: 12/8/2020 7:56:00 AM
Great Imagery! Congrats on your win
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/9/2020 7:24:00 AM
Thank you Paghunda! xomo
Date: 12/4/2020 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful
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Date: 11/20/2020 7:26:00 AM
I missed this gem before Mo, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/19/2020 3:43:00 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful haiku, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/19/2020 1:36:00 PM
Maureen, congratulations on your silver placement with your beautiful haiku!
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Date: 11/18/2020 6:05:00 AM
Great imagery, Maureen. xovb ~~
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Date: 11/10/2020 2:58:00 PM
You are the master of short poetry, Maureen! This beauty is perfect...great imagery! :)
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Date: 11/10/2020 7:55:00 AM
The leaves are falling, falling, falling. Most here are just parchment brown this year. Your work is so colorful. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 11/9/2020 7:59:00 PM
Ah you've captured what is so true. An impressionist would embrace these bleeding words Maureen. Kudos!!!
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Date: 11/9/2020 7:41:00 PM
There are a bunch of leaves on my front lawn I have to rake, this makes me think of it, so evocative of the melancholy beauty of autumn!
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Date: 11/9/2020 2:01:00 PM
Lovely imagery
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Date: 11/9/2020 11:21:00 AM
so lovely said as always - short and perfect :)
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Date: 11/9/2020 10:40:00 AM
If you haven't applied for Alex Trebek's job, please do so today! It requires a Canadian with a quick wit, so you fit perfectly! Aloha! Rico
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