Water Bug Love

Melancholy water bug softly eating.
Linda rolling, endless, leaping.
Gentle passion lazily beating.
Salty apparition, silent, peeping.

Huge white horses gently blow,
Looming, ghostly white horses.
In summer breakers they surf and flow,
Beautiful, mostly complex courses.

Softly looming lazy Lin
Lifts her smooth, clog-clad fin.
Melancholy cricket clicks and hisses,
Waking, Tom, who hastily kisses.

Pungent passion water spout,
Crashing sexy lovers seeping.
Two little whatchamacallits twist and shout,
To summer Linda, swimming, reaping.

Skinny Linda gently ebbing.
Foamy spray sifts through her webbing.
Warm Tom lovingly stirring, laughing.
Fleet water beings jumping and splashing.

Eerie floating cytoplasmic forms
In pools of soupy water streams.
In pungent living sunspot storms
He cooks water bug love in the beams.

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Teddy Kimathi

July 27, 2016 at 3:06 AM

Congrats Tom, for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)

Tom Arnone

July 27, 2016 at 7:16 AM

Thanks, Teddy! :-)

Richard Lamoureux

July 24, 2016 at 8:02 PM

I like a creative piece and this is excellent. Congrats on your win.

Tom Arnone

July 24, 2016 at 8:06 PM

Thanks, Richard.

Royal Ninja

July 24, 2016 at 5:59 PM

Interesting, had my attention. Royal

Tom Arnone

July 24, 2016 at 7:02 PM

Thank you, R. N.

Andrea Dietrich

April 23, 2016 at 7:52 PM

bizarre! but makes for an interesting read. I saw you tell PD that it was your favorite. I think I actually liked the previous one better! but this is a fun poem. it's serendipity that the name in the poem is Linda. That is Pd's name!